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for Indago

by lojenn

person ura
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uuuuh! I do not like this Hermione anymore. She could be so dense sometimes!

Is Harry starting to realise that Draco is more than just sexually attracted to him? I hope so. When, oh, when are Harry and Draco going back together?
person Jolene
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HaHa!! Draco made the Dursleys crawl on thier knees. Draco is making a new den for Harry!!!!!
person Missi
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it!! Please update soon-my husband thinks I\'m crazy because I whine about this story constantly-i.e. \"why isn\'t it updated you? I\'ve been on for two whole hours!!\" Sorry, no pressure, I just love to whine! Snape is-barely-becoming worth my notice again.
person sbkar
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading this fic for a bit... Please, will someone duct-tape Hermione\'s mouth for 15 minutes and let Harry be happy??? Sheesh, she reminds me of the grandmother I know and loathe...harridan, sucking the joy out of everything! And, since Harry is pondering Draco, what is said Supero doing these days? How can he stay away from the \"love of his life\" so easily? And, does he wonder if the child Harry is carrying is his or Snape\'s????
person amethyst
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intresting chapter. read read the others and did not notice any cahnges. but I really liked 48 harry controling his life and creating anew den.
person WretchedScar
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved, loved, loved it! When will we see a bit of Harry and Draco, one on one interaction - not anything raunchy (though I love raunchy) but I mean even just conversation?

Keep it up! You\'re doing great!!
person Rebecca R
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
k it still is good but i do hope it doesent take u to much longer to get things going smoothly again
As in getting back with draco i will cry if they dont get back together!
any ways i still loveu and your stroy touddles
person cve
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I haven\'t reviewed in a while, but I eagerly await each chapter. You weave such an enticing tale. You keep us on our toes. Thank you for being such a fantastic storyteller.



cve
person Flame
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you had me sniffling at first, but now I find myself rolling on the floor with laughter.....

very well written to cause so many different emotions...

Brava.

Now if you please.....type more.
person FairyChild
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay darlin, this story is really good. Normally I don\'t really like stories like these. But I just read up to the last part you posted in one sitting. I really enjoy this story and I really wanted to read more. Could you email me when you posted another part? This story really touches one\'s soul. It really has something it that makes me feel what Harry is feeling. Yes, he is the sub, but he\'s also fighting for contorl in his very own life.

Great work.

F.C.