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by lojenn

person Dezra
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love CaringRon, Hate ControllingHermione, Love ForgivenessSeekingDraco, Hate DistantSnape, Love the story, Keep it up.
person elecktra
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved it!! I soo can
person Jolene
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Ron*Pats Head* Bad Hermione*Duct tapes mouth* Take that Logun*sticks out tonge* Good beginning Draco Now Go Save Harry*Pushes him toward forest* My job here is done.
person SilverPhoenix
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as Hermione said in PS...\"what an idiot\"....omg i cant believe you left it there!!!! and yay to Draco giving Harry gifts :D....well i must go sorrys its not long..i really cant wait till tomorrow to read the next chapter or 2 :)
person BlackCat9
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The way it plays is so believable (won\'t say realistic because I don\'t think there really is such a thing as an Indago XD ) It is one of the most creative and intelligently written story I have read up to date (and I have read quite a few in many different fandoms). I coud say so many good things about this story, but I was limit myself, mostly because me fingers would start hurting after all the typing. Though i will say this, the differing of opinions of similar characters (or at least characters on the same side) is what amazed me the most. Hermione and Ron\'s opinions on the matter slowly changed in different directions beautifully. Hermione going from understanding and trying to be accepting to anger at Malfoy nevering wanting him near Harry (understanable after the staircase throwing incident) then Ron going from weirded out by the whole matter to slightly more accepting and actually standing up to Hermione a bit on Harry\'s behalf for Draco! Those are just one example, making it even more amazing.

And now for a pure fangirl love moment....YOU HAD THE DURSLEY\"S ON THEIR KNEES!!!...*huggles* XD

Alright now that\'s over. ^_~. Fabulous story. I cannot wait to see an update.

-BlackCat9
person MOI
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know whether to be delighted that you have written another chapter, or incredibly bummed that Harry is a werewolf. I mean, if werewolves and Indago always fight, how is he going to deal with both parts being him? Anyway, I\'m glad that you ended the suspense so quickly (at least it wasn\'t Voldemort? I guess?), and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! One question: what exactly are Lydia and Logan to Severus?
What sort of relationship do they have together and what does it mean when Lydia says,
\"I assure you that we are here, with Severus, for more reasons then you think\"
hmm...I dont like Logan and Lydia...and I dont exactly know why....
anyways, happy updating!
person StaplersBreak
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry really isn\'t the brightest crayon, is he?
person Diana
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! poor harry...i loved how you made snape and draco...:cheers: but wouldnt draco not want to be around him...now that he\'s a werewolf...or does he love him too much to care? aww the end was so sweet...i love it when draco and snape growl...ooo so hot...please make drcao still love harry! your such a great writer

Diana
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh the stupid idiotic Gryffindor! He\'s read that werewolves and Indago are natural enemies! He knows they live in the forest. I hope Draco is watching him. Need chapter 52!