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for Indago

by lojenn

person Not named
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmhh, well I like the story, or the concept. But I don
person Red
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story Thank you.
person Becky
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!!! Thats so sad...Remus!!!!*crys*awwwww Thats not cool dude!!!Loving the story so far!!!!!!!!
person Becky
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! YOu are Evil I love you!!!!!! I loved how you did the end but with the bisket...I did not suspect a thing!!!! And its good taht you didnt abuse taht he si Harry Potter and Luck always wins out. I hate When peole do that. They Make something happen and dont have a reasonalbe explination for it. The story was wonderful! I am glad I stuck with it till the end. I admit there were a few times where i didint know where you were going with it but you turned it around and made it a great peice of work!! Congradulations!!!! YOu tottaly Rock!!

Excuse my spelling.
Im to lazy to spell check.
PnC
Love Everybody
Becky
person Ryu-chan
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, good story and very well written although I felt that some of the characters weren't well developed at all. I mean if your going to give Snape lovers you might as well tell us a bit more about them than a couple of lines. I would also have liked to have a bit more history on Snape.On the whole the story was very enjoyable although several parts could have been developed better. And I cried when they said the baby was dead. That was cruel of you...I thought they were going to be a happy family at the end...*sniffs and blows into tissue*
person draconka
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... Wow! I really enjoyed this fic... It was scary in some parts and i nearly cried at the beginigof the last chapter- i thought Harry died! I'm kinda at loss of words now. I just wanted you to know that I really love this fic! It's great!
Well hope your cretivity will never leave you so you can write more great fics (and ofcourse the sequel :) !

Take care!!
person Cat Lynx
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED the story, it was well thought out and kept the reader on the edge of their Seat.. Im off to The next one and Can't wait to read it.
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know a lot of people were turned off by the fact that Snape had sex with Harry. But I just want to tell you that I am upset that Snape has yet to willinngly be with Harry. Well he did when Harry was nearly killed but that is completely different. I'm probably one of the few readers that wants Snape to hook up with Harry. He would just be so much better for Harry.
person isi
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he'd better not be fucking dead. fuck no.
person isi
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fuck you. you made me freaking cry. the next time you write something so brilliant, it isnt allowed to be so sad. bleeding hell, I thought he was dead! *sigh* sorry...feel free to see through my anger to sadness and horror. I thought he was dead, seriously. not cool lol. but I await the sequel! I love this story, it was well written, creative, and excellent all around. do we see more of Lydia and Logan in the next part? are things explained? and who is the new supero, competition for draco!