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for Indago

by lojenn

person Krazy (I really should start logging in...)
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO! It\'s a trap!!!! STOPP! *gonk* I\'\'m hoping it\'s Malfoy, but I\'ma fraid it\'s not... *whimpers* Be careful Harry!!!! *gonk*

*~* Krazy *~*
person tessa3
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well HOLY FUCKIN SHIT!!!! DAMN!!! NO HARRY DONT GO TO THE DARKSIDE!!! DONT DO IT!!! NOOOOOO DONT DO IT!!!!
person Masulbin
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was thrown off by Logan for a sec-- was he inserted in the revision? But after looking it over, I\'m very intrigued. He sounds like an intersting new nemesis for Harry. I\'m excited to see what\'s next
person anonymous
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I cannot wait to read what happens next!! Please update soon!
person Lily Plum
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh noes not a werewolf

I bet he doesn\'t become one cos he\'s a magical being and his dna is alreayd too close to the werewolves?
person Mina
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Alex
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!
person Alexa
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters!!! Great!
I love the gifts, I love that Herray is standing up for what he wants, I hate the Harry is gullible enough to go into the forbidden forest just because someone is whimpering, but he is the \"hero\".
I actually hope nothing too drastic happens. If there is really someone in need of help, I hope H. helps and gets a new friend. (But I bet that\'s not it.)
And if it is danger, I hope it\'s not too big and won\'t take up too many chapters, since I\'m really eager to read about nesting and Draco.
person Larimar
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.K., we are neck high in agnst here! The plot thickens! I was very sad that Harry got bitten. I hope you have some sort of werewolf cure for Indigos up your sleeve!
person foxfire
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats so horrible!! hes indigo! indigo!!!\" *starts sobbing* -cool that hes back with draco, but still!!!-