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for Indago

by lojenn

schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exciting, but I have one thing to point out. A werewolf can\'t turn someone else into a werewolf unless they\'re a wolf. Their human bite doesn\'t do more damage than the bite itself. Aside from that, very exciting. I\'d also like to say that Harry is an idiot.
person pucca
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So is Draco indeed falling love with Harry? I\'d love to see it coming! How about Severus? I know he cares for Harry.... What will happen between Harry and him? Love your story! Please update soon!
person WitchbladeHell
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Durham. Don\'t worry too much about that last chapter! I thought it was awesome! I really liked the way you executed the struggle between Harry and the weries. Even if some people think you may have put Harry a bit out of character for it, which I don\'t really think you did, they have to realise that sometimes it needs to be done in order to make a fan fic complete. Anyway, well done on that chapter! I just read chapter 43, man, I almost cried!
person Yana
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG how could they kill a baby
person Dominic Shade
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...one would think that the Indago species would be immune to the werewolf bite...I mean...their ancestors were rivals...wouldn\'t they have thought to do such a thing long ago? It would only make sense to believe that they can withstand each others most brutal attacks, otherwise one race would have surely died out to the other. I expect Harry won\'t be leaving his Superios...or even his room for a long while after this. That has to be a traumatic thing to go through. And it sucks that the law doesn\'t prevent this...I mean, if Indago are protected...shouldn\'t werewolves be? And now I\'m really wondering on who Snape is bedding...though I started out liking Logan...*thinks...lightbulb forms over head*...Logan is another word for wolf...am I on the proper track here? Hm...though Snape certainly would have smelled the bastard out...maybe one of the pack promised the bite to Logan in return for his spying on Harry? After this has passed, I really want Harry to become incredibly dependent on his Superios, becoming fearful of even the smallest noises, not being able to be around anything but his own species, having to be held at all times and waking up screaming from nightmares...those sorts of things. Will you be reintroducing Dumbledore yet? I miss the old guy. I understand Hermione\'s guilt and her need to protect Harry, and I\'m also glad to see how much Ron thinks for himself. I still await the purring though...but that should probably come *much* later now, certainly after Harry is over this event...that should take a long while.


Good times and rock on,

Dom
person anon
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg....poor harry....omg....is he going to be a werewolf now!!!!!!!!!???????????//
person Eowynselixure
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Harry\'s a werewolf? NONONONONONO Love how Draco rescued him though! I knew he would! Please don\'t let Harry be a werewolf now, it would be far too complicated!

*Eowyns elixure
person DarkQueen
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your note that you wrote on one of the chapters. This is your story and it should go where you want it to go. Not how the reader wants it. I however am not displeased nor do I think I could be by your writing. I\'ve enjoyed your story since the beginning and will stick with it till the end. I liked your version on werewolf bites and just the whole indigo story line. Throughout reading this fic I was hoping that Draco would come to love harry. I\'m very happy that is seems to be coming true! Please update soon, I can\'t wait to read if harry\'s baby turns out alright.
person cottoncandy
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEREWOLVES SUCK! *skakes fist at computer screen* YOU WEREWOLF BASTARDS!

UPDATE SOON!
person Anon
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go gk chesterton!

don\'t listen to them re the forest scene. it\'s your damn story, and however unbelievable some people thought it was, it was well written. i thought it was entirely plausible, btw. it\'s called artistic license, you dolts!