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for Indago

by lojenn

person Bright One
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far! I can\'t wait for the next update though because I really don\'t want Harry to be a werewolf. Maybe his Indago blood will prevent it? I\'m not sure, but we will see what you pull out of your hat tonight. Looking forward to it. Thank you for a wonderful story.
person Diana
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww i wanna cry! good chapter though.....im just hoping for the best in the next one! and dont let us bother you...its your story!

Diana
person Sesshysfavhuman
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I just got up and now i have a numb ass from reading your wonderful story. I usually dont read Harry/draco but this one caught my attention and I must say that i will be reading mor e harry/draco stories because of this. It took me 2 hours to read it all the way through and i think you are doing such a great job. Please dont change what you wrote just to please the reviewers your ideal is original and I think that you did an excellant job the chapter befor this one. This is your story and you can write it the way you want to thats why its called fiction. So please dont let the reviews depress you at all. Till next time L.J
person Nicole
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I have said it before but i really hate you sometimes. I can\'t believe u ended the chapter like that! I want to send that pack to ur house for being so evil. The only thing that saves you is i know i can read a new chapter tomorrow.
person Wildfire
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have never not liked a chapter before but I don\'t like Harry becomeing a werewolf it\'s to much. Plus if Indego\'s and were wolves have always fought you\'d think Indego\'s would be immune to the bite or they\'d all be one as when they fight I\'m sure they get bit a lot. And further more if Harry is a werewolf he can\'t breed so that doesn\'t work either. really I don\'t think an Indego should be able to be a werewolf it doesn\'t seem to work.

WIldfire
person Baka Basu
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kawaii so kawaii
person Softwillow1687
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I hope Harry will live.

I think you are a great author and don\'t listen to other people they are just jealous. I loved the last chapter and continue making great chapters.
person Menecarkawan
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off I would like to say that I am truly sorry if my last review offended you in any way. I liked your last chapter. I thought it was written
up very well. I just didn\'t like whole werewolf thing, that\'s all. But it is your story, so you should write it however you like. No need to pull
anything. Now, this chapter... I\'m very glad Harry\'s not going to turn, but I do hope that his baby survives. I know you\'d have some
purpose if it does not, and it would definitely add to the angst factor, which I love. Angst is what makes a fic worth reading in my opinion.
And may I just say... DRACO HAS A HEART! YAY! DRACO HAS A HEART! *does a happy dance* Even if the baby dies, maybe now Harry
and Draco can get together and make an attempt at happiness. That would be so lovely, but it would be even better if the baby didn\'t
die. It would be so tragic if the baby died.
person Name Forger
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You, Love, are amazing.

I honestly was a bit.. deterred mindfully(bet that made no sense, but I haven\'t any words to describe how I felt) at how the chapter before your current chapter was executed. Yet now, it has seemed to grow on me, and I accept it. It was odd, in a way, but with the current chapter, things are cleared up.

I read that one reviewer\'s review on how you should pull back and redo the other chapter, and I felt bad for thinking that you should redo it when I read that. You don\'t need to redo anything. I see how Harry reacted and how he defended himself with words, rather then brawling with his fists, which would be quite uncharistic. Honestly, I get it now.

So, I truely hope you keep up your wonderful writing parade(;dies;) and you keep that chapter, and do not have seconds thoughts about that one chapter or your A/N that you made;it was an appropriate A/N. ;3


Peace love & Plove,
Ms. N.F.K.
person Masulbin
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great chapter; ignore the one pissy reviewer. You\'ve written it so well thus far I believe aynthing from here will kick further ass. Looking forward to what\'s next.
Besides, after 50 or so chapters, you\'ve certainly earned your creative flexibility iwth the plot. If it involves turning Harry into a werewolf, bring on the fur and the fangs, I say!