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for Indago

by lojenn

person anonymous
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read more!
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! Draco loves Harry and Hermione finally sees it!!
She is no longer a bitch in my book! That was an emotional
chapter...I was almost to tears in the end.
My finals are over and I have time to relax.
This was the perfect end to my day. Thank you so much for writing this
story and continuing with it.
Despite all that some people have said, I found chapter52 to be one of the best
chapters in the story. Dont listen to those who hurtfully criticize.
By reading that chapter, one can see just how much time and effort
you spend behind your story. We are alll inspired by the way you
write. I dont think I have ever encountered a story like yours...
its so imaginative and lively--keeping us on the edge of our seats
waiting for the next installation. I can tell that you work really hard
on each and every chapter; and the love you feel for the characters
and the plot in general shine through in your writing. Please keep up the
excellent work. You are a brilliant writer and it shows by the hits and
the reviews. Simply amazing. I have never seen anyone garner so much
attention and acknowiedgment from the readers in a month and a half.
Thank you for giving us all something to look forward to. We love your work
and are inspired by it.
Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Luvs!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... poor Harry. Is he a werewolf now? Is the baby okay?

I do hope that you\'ll update again soon.
person Missi
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jumping around and crying and cheering at the top of my lungs like an idiot* YEA! DRACO LOVES HARRY!! I knew it! And Snape wasn\'t nearly as much of an ass as usual!! And it\'s your story-your universe, your reality (so to speak) and you should write the way YOU want. Screw everyone else. What the hell do we know-it\'s not our story. Anyone who\'s going to tell you to rewrite your story because of some stupid bite needs to get a clue. People rewrite myths and legends all of the time. If they don\'t like it they shouldn\'t read it. I like it.
person emery
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I first found your story at Skyehawke, but decided to check you out here (because everyone whores on aff). I love the story, i have it bookmarked and check it daily.

As per your AN, however, I know exactly how you feel. Reviewers are kind of like soccer moms. Some can get so testy if the game isn\'t going in favour of their character. I\'ve received some pretty harsh comments like \"i think i\'ll keep my comments for your next chapter, i\'m afraid of what i\'ll say about this one\". It hurts, I curled up into a ball and was dead to the world for like two days and totally ignored fan-fiction. But then I realized it\'s probably just better to write for yourself first, and if the fancy strikes you, read reviews for their amusing content. (Admit it, us fan girls embarass ourselves constantly with our gushy theatrics over a plot twist). A reviewer should never loose you from your moorings, after all, it\'s not their story to tell.

I eagerly anticipate following your story, it is extremely unique and written with intelligence ^_^d
person MOI
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And in case you haven\'t figured it out yet, most of us did love chapter 53. Fifty-two (that confused me a couple of times early
on- I was so excited that there was another chapter, to only be crushed by there not being another one. Anyways). And to those
stupid nonbelievers- somewhere in the books (I can\'t remember where) there is the intimation of werewolves howling in the
forest, when it *isn\'t* the full moon. So they\'re still werewolves, whether they look like humans or not. We don\'t call Lupin in
his human form a werehuman, now do we? That would be silly. And whether on not Draco has silver streaks on his cheeks,
Harry still wants to ___ for him. It made perfect sense.
person shelly101
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooo! he can\'t become a werewolf!!!!!! that was an awesome chapter though, with an awesome ending! thanks!
person Bladefire
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!!! I absolutely love this story. And now i finally have time to review. ^_^;; I\'m really impressed with the way you\'ve done the characters and the whole Indago thing. Very well thought out. Keep writing please! this is one of the few story\'s i keep checking for updates.
person sak
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please do not doubt your writing skills. The previous chapter was hard to read, but you are not easy on your characters. It all leads up to something more, pivotal decisions that have far-reaching effects. It made this chapter all that more powerful. This is an engaging story and all the reviewers and readers demonstrate that.
person Laurwen
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I LOVE this story and have been loving it since the first chapter, I will admit that I haven\'t reviewed yet.
That is just because all of the other reviewers were saying what I wanted to say.
However this latest chapter has prompted me into action . . .
One of the things I love so much about the story was the way you manage to stay with the cannon, I will finish reading this story no
matter what, but I feel like you might lose some readers if Harry becomes a werewolf. It just seems so arug . . .
I love your story though and I want to see how it ends and I\'m glad you didn\'t kill the baby
You\'re an amazing writer and author and you have the power over the story but . . .
PLEASE DON\'T TURN HARRY INTO A WEREWOLF!