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by lojenn

person Flame
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Bursts into tears with Harry*

you can\'t leave it at that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was truly great....truly....but....I hate crying!!!!!

If it\'s well written enough it makes me cry too!

Congradulations...you made me cry.....

I\'m gonna go cry in my pillow now...

you must update soon...and preferably...not end it in TEARS!!!!!

um...please?
person cottoncandy
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY *jumps up and shouts!* Draco LOVES Harry! You\'ve made me happy! I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person Dominic Shade
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read the review that must have set you off, and I\'d like to point out why that person is an idiot. First off, yes, werewolves can infect with their bite when in human form. We learn this from when Remus Lupin said that he was bitten by his nephew. And though Harry is Indago, his baby might not be, this is where the bite would really come into effect. So it the concern isn\'t for Harry immediately, it\'s for the pup he carries. All the nutrients in Harry\'s blood would go to the pup, but so would the virus of the bite. I can see the reviewers point on one aspect, Harry is still Harry, perhaps he should have been able to think more rationally. But the thing is, to my knowledge, Harry has not been pupped in any of the books, therefore any assumtions derived would have to be re-thought. It\'s only logical to believe that Harry\'s new insticts would center around him protecting his pup. So any rational thought probably would have left him. And how could Harry be the only wizard in the clearing? Just because the attackers are werewolves doesn\'t mean they\'re not wizards. That was a stupid comment on their part. This person also seemed to overlook the fact that Draco is *not* the dominant Superio, Snape is. That would mean that he is less powerful, this would be the reason for why he didn\'t overpower the werewolves so easily. Also, Draco would fear hurting Harry, as well as the fact that Draco has spent most his entire life on the potion that quelled his instincts and natural power, he\'s probably still getting used to using them. In essence...I believe that there is absolutely no reason to reconsider the direction in which you are writing this fantastic fiction. It is incredibly original and very brilliantly written. I\'m very astonished and proud of the intense work and heart you\'ve put into this story. You are a great writer and I can\'t tell you how much of the passion you put into your story effects me. It\'s obvious that you care about your readers and I hope that you disreguard that naive reviewer and continue on spinning your tale.


Good times and rock on,

Dom
person Squall-sama
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeels and faints* OMG!!! I LOVED it!!!! How sad though--poor Harry, now he\'s an even bigger freak! >.< *laughs* Should have knonw you\'d do something like that. ^_~ You hadn\'t tortured him for a while....
person FairyChild
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay you just had to make me cry?

As for what people said about the last part.

I know a few were-wolf stories, yes, biteing Harry the way they did could of changed Harry that way. For if any of their fluids get into his blood stream or into him he could change. Thus the reason why Remus might never have sex. (Then agian that would be very bad for us who loved to see him gettin\' some.) I shall give you my full reveiw when the story is finsihed.
person Evee
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re amazing! I believed the warewolf bit. It makes sense to me.

Plus! Your thoughts on the matter do count, no matter if you complain a bit! It\'s understandable. I thought the chapter was awesome! <3 Keep up the breathtaking work! -gives chocolate-
person ura
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Harry. Why does everything bad happen to him?

At least Draco is back now. He will tale care of Harry, right?

I know that Harry got bitten by werewolves but I following your logic this should not turn him into a werewolf. Harry is not human after all. I guess he could get real sick, but it should be all in terms of biting consequances.

What I do not get it is why Draco could not get into a blood craze and \"debone\" werewolves.
person MOI
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, this was me reading this chapter:

A/N: I hope she didn\'t think I was being mean. I was just so scared for Harry, because being a werewolf
and an Indago would be very bad.
Harry finds out he\'s not going to be a werewolf: Yes! We are saved! Now things can go happily-ever-after!
I don\'t have to cry over Harry tonight!
The baby might be a werewolf, and it could kill Harry: What happened to my happily-ever-after? Now I\'m
heartbroken. You\'d better make that baby an Indago, you hear me, m\'ld? Or I shall never forgive you.
The Draco/Severus/Lucius scene: *tears* Oh, so sad, so sweet, my happily ever after is on its way. And
take that, Hermione! Okay, I forgive you, Granger, you don\'t have to die anymore.
After it\'s all over: Omigod! Another cliffie! Do you purposefully end each chapter with a cliffhanger, so that
we\'ll all review in agony? I knew it! Y\'know, I\'m going to be dead of heartattacks soon from all this.
I loved it!
person SilverPhoenix
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...poor Draco...and Harry...and *crys*....that was one of the best chapters ever...and as to your AN, i cant believe people could tell you to re write it cuz 1 its not their story, 2 its your say as to what happens and 3 they have no damn say in what happens enless you ask for it...i think that it was fine, and i loved it, if someone doesnt like what you do in YOUR fic then thats there problem, thats why i never flame storys, cuz its there story and they can put what they want in it...as for this chapter, it wanted to make me cry, and i really cant wait for the next chapter to see if Harry lives or not(PLEASE dont kill him off and the story ends, please??) well *hugs* update soon :)
person TeeDee
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Finally! Draco has returned to Harry\'s side. And maybe this horrible experience will teach little Snape a lesson. Or Harry one, though I doubt that. Poor bugger! Well! At least Remus can be near Harry now? I hope...?

Ee! And this whole wolf thing will be a very interesting twist!