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for Indago

by lojenn

person IrIdEsCeNt
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG.......omg........I dont know what to say, that chappy almost made me cry!!! I dont want harry do die!!!!!!!.......hey, I rhymed.
person Alex
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But isn\'t a werewolf bite only \"contageous\" bduring the full moon??
person Nicole
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I already had a bad day and this made me so sad. i know dracos been an ass but i still gotta love him. i don\'t like him like that. please more please. if u want ill even beg like a sub hehehe
person chaos
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First, I loved the chapter where Harry was attacked. It was written in a way that it was believable ~ yes, it wasn\'t exactly like cannon but what fan fic is? Second, I love this chapter as well and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. Your fic is the first I check when I log on and the last I double check before I close down for the night. I like the agnst in this chapter where Draco starts taking responsibilty instead of just being spoiled with a new toy. I also like the fact that the brainiac, Mione has realized that Draco does love Harry ~ now I hope that Harry can discover that same fact!
person Anon
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*undignified squeal* ^^ yay, i love this story so much, and it\'s so nice of you to update so much, so i dont\' have to die waiting. keep up the good work! ^^
person Anon
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not a were-wolf please don\'t turn him into a were-wolf, doesn\'t it have to be a wolf that enables the change it can\'t happen when their in human form?... oh and please say he lost the baby.
person Fefs
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. i go away for some days and the last chapter that you updated had to be this one? I preatty sure that if Harry change in a wherewolf i will die. I will...
Ps: The way Draco is trying to get Harry back is really sweet, congratulations! Oh, and i am loving this caring Ron.. i\'m glad he is not being a bitch abou this situation like some... *cough hermione cough* Hugs!
person StaplersBreak
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm...*raises hand* I have a question. From the way you wrote the scene, it sounded like Harry got bit by a wereWOLF (emphasis on WOLF there) ahem, but that wouldn\'t be true because they were all in human form and the full moon isn\'t until another two days. So some guys just bit him and shook him like a dog would? I don\'t see that.
person foxfire
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"ahhhhhhh!\" *tackles* \"im sorry! im sorry!! did i hert your fellings too? im sorry!!! i just wanted him to stay an indigo, and i actually thought the whole wolf pack and new breeding thing was cool!! but if i hert your feelings in any way, im sorry!!! an i love your storie!!! i swear!!!!!! i do!!! when i was reading the chapter the only thing that confused me was that, when he went to the boy and he cheacked him over for injuries, he had to tuch him right/, so wouldnt he feel the instinckt to flee? , but then i thought they probably need a minimall of contact like hugging, so ya i was like \"oh ok!!\" so im so so sorry if i every happened to offeneds you!!!!!!!\" *runs of sobbing,....*
person Saniya
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffelz* awwwwwwww


I liked the last chapter. Left good suspence and it was not unrealistic. The werewolf bite thing i thought was a common myth but maybe not. *excited hop*** I can\'t wait for the next chapter! x.x I know it wasn\'t the one typical of the series but so? What bugs me about some is that this is an obvious AU Sure it has some of the original plot but not all so it shouldn\'t be a perfect match to the book anyway. Its your interpretation of it and its stupid of someone to say like, oh well i didn\'t like it so write it over....
I think you\'ve done fantastic so far *thumbs up* keep it up! ^^