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The author has the responsibility to put his dream, his vision, on paper. Sometimes, others don\'t agree. You make a choice, based on your idea, of which is more important--and you did. I thought the last chapter developed a wonderful twist, even if it did make Harry look like an ineffectual fool. Your A/N explained that I was so caught up in the events, I missed many of the underlying reasons for said events. I\'m just happy that this chapter see\'s Harry NOT a warewolf, and your plot has taken another dramatic turn. I was surprised the Draco begged Snape\'s forgiveness, but not that he loved Harry. What makes it so hard, is that your Indago have their own restrictions and it seems that Snape is Snape, Draco is in an extreme position, and Harry takes his subserviance to the \'nth degree. Mostly, it seems to me you just like to torture Harry. And your readers. *smile*

i adore you and your wonderous story. please update immediately.

I have to say I find the criticism for the last chapter very petty, I mean there are lots of stories where the author interprets things in their own way. Although I am not very knowledgeable about this \'correct\' way of infecting someone with lycanthropy, I find your version very plausible and it just...fits. The way they fell on him, perfection, and the fact that almost until the bit, you don\'t know whether they are \'evil\' or just normal people looking for their own way of life. So thumbs up for managing to get an engaging duality for all the actors. This chapter was so exciting!! Not having a clue waht wasa going to happen, and then read about the baby brought tears to my eyes!! (This is very long, sorry!!)
All in all, I think it is because you have such an arresting story that people demand (their perseaved) perfection, not because your writing has gotten worse! Take heart and keep up the good work!
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*sobs* That\'s so sad.... *sniff* Merlin, you just get better and better with every passing chapter... I don\'t know how that\'s possible!!

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Well... ummmmm.. that was really really DEEP!!! OMG!! THAT WAS SO GOOD!!! GIVE ME MORE!! NOW!!! DAMMIT!!!

Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you.

I loved that chapter. It feels like a turning point...but then I thought I felt other other turning points as well only to have the story turn again. So we\'ll have to wait and see. Great job.

OKAY! I\'m sorry I feel soooooooo bad, I didn\'t mean to make you doubt you skills as a writer, infact if
anything you should be proud you have me soo wrapped up in this story I dreaded what would happen to your characters!!!
I love this story and I\'m very glad that Harry isn\'t a werewolf, and I love thisplot twist so much better. Once again
you have come up with something better than I could have thought as a possibility! I hope Harry survives!
This is an excellent story and you are an amazing writer don\'t doubt that!! I can\'t wait to see what is going
to happen and I\'m said that I have to wait until tomorrow!
Also I just wanted to mention that this chapter was so with that cannon, I love the exchange in the end with Draco and party,
and if I was complaining about the cannon in the last chapter is was more because I really didn\'t want another horrible
thing to happen to Harry!
I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen and I don\'t know if you read all these reviews but if you do then I\'m sorry if
my last one made you feel like less of a writer because you are such a talented one!

I\'m still so loving this story!! And a confusing story it is, too. It\'s fantabulous.

OH MY GOODNESS! how can this happen poor harry,
now draco and snape wont want him anymore!
Grrs...
ok if harry becomes a wearwolf then some good better happen
because I really need something good to happen!
any ways you true and faithful admirior
rebecca

I love the way you did Draco\'s desperation. Seriously, I\'m all teary-eyed now. Also really apprecative of how often this story is updated.