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::sniffles:: HOW LOVELY!!!! Awww! I just luv this story!!

Omg, oh please dont let him turn into a werewolf! that would be too awful. But I am so glad that Draco came to his rescue. I hope they work everything out
And that draco can finally leave that horrible snape. that just wasnt meant to be. But definitely keep up the good work. Its awesome

Splendid chapters!!! I loved all of them I hope Harry and the baby are okay...I know Draco must have been so worried! Damn those werewolves couldn\'t they just leave Harry alone, well I\'ve been wondering why isn\'t Harry creating a new den? Well anyway update soon, this story is the best!!!!

I\'ve been reading this story from the beginning. While it has always been quite a bit AU, I don\'t mind that as long as the story is believable, logical and interesting as it has been up to now. But your latest plot twist is just too much. First of all, werewolf bites can infect only when done in wolf form and only to humans. Second, Harry is half human and half Indago and partially related to werewolves; according to your story, logically he should be immune even if he was bitten during the full moon. Third, while Harry is an Indago sub, he is still Harry--the Boy who lived, the leader of Dumbledore\'s Army, the Boy who killed Voldemort in your story. He might be afraid of the werewolves, but he wouldn\'t back down from them. He\'s a good enough wizard that he could get his wand back with a simple Accio and if I\'ve read your last chapter correctly he\'s the only wizard in that clearing; he should be more than able to defend himself. For that matter, when Draco and Snape show up, they too could easily use their magic to defeat these were wolves. I\'d really llike to continue reading this story, it showed a lot of promise. I suggest you consider withdrawing the chapter and rewriteing it as you did an earlier one. It\'s still a good story, you just need to rethink the direction in which you are going

I loved last chapter, don\'t listen to the anyone your logic was sound. It is your universe you could make the sky purple if you wanted. And the peole yellow. Nice save with the outcome of the bites. PLot twists are good. Please keep it up.
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Phorcys

Don\'t let Harry Change into a werewolf. Please don\'t do that.

*cries* oh my god! poor harry! and indago and a werewolf?! poor thing!! but at least draco and snape saved him before those bastards cut into him! please update soon- i can\'t wait for the next chappie- it\'s better and cheaper than drugs but still so addicting!


~Twisted\'s

DAMN HARRY!!! DAMN WOLVES!!! *shakes fist* ergh!!! *flops into chair waiting for next chapter*

Oh-My-God!Your fanfiction is simply... wonderful!I loved it!Keep writing, I\'m very curious about what\'s gonna happen next.
Hugs!

Another great chapter! Please don\'t listen to those negative fb people. All writers are entitled to artistic licence and I didn\'t find the werewolf scene too unlikely at all. I really adore this fic and admire the way you develop your characters. And thank you so much for showing that Draco really loves Harry (even if he goes about it a bit strangely)! Please remember that for every petty person who finds something to complain about there are a thousand or more readers who simply love your story. Keep up the great work!