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for Indago

by lojenn

person kittynoir
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. That last scene - *fans herself* Thank you. I\'m now a pile a goo on the floor.

I love it that it never once got sappy either - they yelled at each other until... the hot sex. mmmm.
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww, they made up. how cute. more soon? plz?
person icestar
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ive been slack ne?

ah well, better late than never.

firstly, i adore the way you update nearly everyday! its really encouraging.

second, the interactions between sev, draco, and harry are very nice. as with hermoine and harry...

good job. ^_^
person Neqs
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We love and appreciate you right back! That was a breath-taking chapter. :) This fic has given me so much joy that if you were here, I\'d hug you senseless! So, thank you so very much for writing it. :)
person JJ
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOooooohhhhhhhh! That was hot! Finally the git is showing he loves him. Will Harry now forgive him for calling his child a disease? What is Snape gonna do now that Draco\'s scent is back all over Harry? Will Herm. end up defending them both with Snape? At least he can now go back to taking the potion. Is Draco ever going to be more human than indago? And don\'t forget the warewolves - what are they planning now to f* up Harry\'s world? I\'m surprised that Dumbledore hasn\'t had Hagrid expell them from the forest for threatening a student.
person viira
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I sincerely love your story. Keep them coming yeah!! =]
person reader
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you\'re not stressin over that one reviewer. I think this story is brilliant and that it was creative to move outside of convention. And what lame throws a hissy about folk lore (or whatever)? Is it that serious? Well, I wouldn\'t trip. I\'m also glad that you are consistent with your updates. I don\'t know anyone who writes as fast (not to mention with quality). Keep it up!
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They got back together! Draco is a stupid prat, but they got back together! *does a happy dance*
person Alexa
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fist of all, I\'d like to apologize for the harsh way in which I expressed my opinion in my last review. Perhaps I should have waited for my emotions to cool down a bit before I expressed my opinion. I didn\'t catch that A/N you\'re referring too, but I understand that you were hurt by one of our reviews. I\'m sorry if it was my review. Even if it wasn\'t, my apology for the harshness of my words still stands.

In light of that, I don\'t know if I should say what I think about the last two chapters. I did take a break and thought about what I want to say and weather I mean it. And you are more than welcome to disragard my opinion, and to erase this review. I don\'t mean to hurt your feelings, that was never the aim of any of my reviews.

That said, I truly think that the last chapters were a let down. You were on the way to writing a gradual prossess of change in Draco and Harry\'s return into the relationship. It was going great, and you wrote it beautifly. I was holding my breath. Then, in stead of keeping it up, you used the oldest trick in the book - putting the \'heroine\' in danger, and thus exploding and exposing everyone\'s feelings. They just scream a bit, show that they are in love, make some promices and then have great, emotion-filled sex. Some fights will still happen, the outside problems will threaten a bit and possibly some grat loss will happen (at which point they can get closed, or, as most novels do, grow distant and hurt, but after some deep pain get back together, and work to rebuild their relationship), and then everything will be resolved. It\'s what 99.9 % of romance novels do. It\'s cute, but it is beneath your writing skills. You could have chosen the road less traveled and you cold have made it so good and strong!

Sorry if my words sting, but I still stand by them. You have the skill and talent to do much better, and be more original. The originality of your writing is what drew so many to your story. I\'ll wait for your next story, and hope that you\'ll make braver choices.

Still a fan,
Alexa.
person Goddess Of The Void
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wahhhhhh! this has got to be the most riveting fanfic from this fandom that I\'ve read in a looonnnggg while! I started reading a few hours ago, and didn\'t stop once the whole way through... Now that I have finished up to where you have posted... I realize I am in dire need of a drink of water, i haven\'t moved in so long... and one of my feet has gone numb, possibly from my dodgy seating skills... but nevertheless. utterly, utterly, completely, incredibly, definitely soooo impressed right now. the twists the turns, your characterization. *whistles* simply can\'t wait for more! i keep refreshing the page in hope of a new chapter... ^^; ehehehe. anyhow. i sincerely hope for a good\'n\'happy Harry Draco ending. T_T better deliver. lol. whatever LdDurham-sama sees fit will surely suffice. you\'ve gained an avid fan! keep writing!