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for Indago

by lojenn

person MOI
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s still not sappy! Way to go, you. Trying to get those lines out without letting it sink into butterflies and birdies must
have been challenging. So, is Draco going to propose properly?
person Sophie
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O MY GOD!!! THIS WAS SO GOOD!!! but now i am DYING to find out if the baby is Indago or if Harry will die (PLEASE NO!!)

Update soon!! PLEASE!!!

Thnx for writing
Sophie
person Rebecca R
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!... wow ... best one yet! im speachless!
Your are great cant wait untill u update
person Yana
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww those two were made for each other
person tessa3
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAN!! i thought it was going to get violent there for a moment glad it didn\'t and i am glad that Draco is coming to terms with Har\'s decision..but for some odd reason i beat shit is going to hit the fan anyways about it *shrugs* ah well... until next time.
person mysticsong
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read 53-55 . . most fabulous!

Such a cliffie waiting for the full moon bit .. though I suppose unless you intend to end your story abruptly by killing off the main character, that Harry shall fare well.
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 56! But he will hurt Harry if he forces him to abort. Though it looks like he\'s going to trust Harry\'s judgement. Though I\'ve got my fingers crossed that Harry is correct. I\'m on pins and needles!
person WretchedScar
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m dead tired here, just got back from the beach - but I immediately logged on to read the latest three chapters I had missed while being gone. BRILLIANT! I know it\'s terrible to say this buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut ::pause . . . . deep breath:: I WANT A HAPPY ENDING DAMNIT! I want Harry and baby to survive - I want a happy, sappy, furking ending.

Yep. Thanks.

Hee.
person sbkar
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 55 review: Holy about-face, Batman!
Such an eloquent, dare I say, sincere (?), apology from Draco!!!
And, all lovey, too! Wow!!

But, I\'m still rooting for that \"serendipitous luck\" and Harry\'s powerful
inherent magic to save the day!!! And, the baby!!!

Now, go forth and write more, oh author!!! I am sooooo addicted!!!!
person shelly101
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww!!! so good!!