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for Indago

by lojenn

person shelly101
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!! NO!!!!!!!
person BlackCat9
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damnit he can\'t die because of this, because the prophecy says somethings or another about Harry killing Voldemort or Voldemort killing harry. Fate would not let Harry die this way.....Argh....phew....So when\'s the next chapter ^_^

-BlackCat9
person Wildfire
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s just the indego blood fighting the bites off right? THe baby isn\'t fully Indego so it\'s just having trouble pushing it away but it will right?
person Eowynselixure
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOT!!! I knew it, I knew something like this would happen. But we all know you can\'t let Harry die at this stage...or yyou could...NONONO DO NOT let Harry die!

Please your scaring me!

*Eowyns elixure
person ura
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a terrible cliffy! I hope you update tomorrow in the fisrt part of the day.
I will not be able to sleep now. Poor Harry and poor everybody else.
It was heartbreaking to read about Harry realizing that he was wrong (I hope he was not) and tears slowly leaking from his eyes.

I actually thought the first part of the chapter was funny with all the barters between Ron and Draco.
It was also nice to see how much Lucius cares for his son even if the manner is so unsual.
It is cool that Draco chose to control his dominance around Harry.

person ura
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would also think that it would be an appropriate moment for Harry to tell Draco
that he loved him, since Harry thought that he is dying. Why did he not tell Draco that he loved him?
person digi-girl
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*twitches* i read 57 chapters and then i get a cliff hanger! *sobs* the in-humanity! *sniffels* but at least i know i\'ll keep reading. gods, i think this is the second longest story i\'ve ever read, and its not even finished, well the other story isn\'t either though. 99 chapters and still going that one is. But, man, all thoughs plot twists and stuff. It kept me reading. I haven\'t done that in a while. It just shows that the story is really good, so just had to keep trecking. I\'m looking forward to the next chapter.
person Karen
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I\'d like to say sorry for not reviewing earlier as I have been reading since around chapter 38! :P
I\'d just like to say that I love your fic. I\'m so obsessed, the first thing I have to do in the morning before anything else is check my computer for the new chapters. :D How could you leave a cliffe like that though! Now I\'ve got to go to work with the suspense killing me. I\'m so not going to be able to concentrate today!!!
Anyway, I will be looking forward to the next chapter and hope I don\'t have to wait longer than tomorrow morning to read it!
Karen
person Diamondkitten
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your story in two days. Darn it all, people kept distracting me. It was awesome and powerful. My compliments. I was so upset when I was reading through the part about Harry leaving Draco, and for some strange reason I kept defending Draco. In this story, I love Draco, and even with him hurting Harry, I still loved him. There are many stories that I do not love Draco in, so it is saying something that you could have Draco hurt my favorite character (hint: Harry ;) ) and i kept on loving Draco. Anyway, I will support whatever ending you choose for this story (as long as Harry doesn\'t all the sudden fall in love with Severus, and even though I am a Snape lover, I would still dislike that ending). You have written this story in such a way that I will except however you choose this to end. Though I would love it if Harry lived and there was a happy BELIEVABLE fluffy ending, I would still ove this story if Harry died. I also wanted to thank you for sharing your wonderful story with all us undeserving people, and thank you for having DECENT GRAMMAR! :) My goodness, there are some stories out there that I just want to go through with red ink and mark it up. Well, have a good day, and good luck with your writing!
PS. You should be thankful that I reviewed this story because *stucks nose up into the air arrogantly* I only deign to give my opinion to a select few. I only review about 1 in 100 stories I read. Now, you may go lord this over your fellow others.
person TeeDee
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg. Omg.

Sense tells me he won\'t die. Will he? Oh no. This soooo isn\'t good! I need more, soon. This is NOT a nice place to leave us off at! The babies gotta get OUT of there somehow. Before Harry dies!

Ayyye! I\'m going nuts now!