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Oh how evil!!! You can\'t leave it here! Does Harry live? But the moon wasn\'t up yet! Oh I nees chapter 57!!!!

AAAARRRRGH, I HATE cliffhangers!!!!!

But at least Draco is coming around.

Pleeeeeaaaaase update soon!!

cheers

i\'m not going to whimper, bitch and morn, because i know you are not going to let our lil\' darling die. you see you\'ve left little clues all over and tell me that as a canie(sp?) based that share the same ancestor with the wearwolves i don\'t have to worry since all this would do is force a very painful amigus(sp??) transformation, ensuring both mom and pup/cub survival.

P.S.
it\'s harry motto: \"Your abnormalities are my normality, and your normalities my abnormlity.\"
Like??? I made it up.

What an evil cliffie! Bravo!!!!

I just found your story this weekend (I\'m relatively new to the Potter slash arena), and I must compliment you. What a great story. I love all the plot twists and turns, and I totally believe your portrayals of the characters, as well as your dialogue.

Couple questions ...

1) What are your plans for Lydia and Logan? Are they simply in the story as a plot device or will more be revealed? I ask because right now they feel out of place, like they don\'t really belong in the story.

2) Bravo on your foreshadowing of the werewolf confrontation. I saw you working up to it, and was pleased it didn\'t become a forgotten \"plot bunny.\"

3) This may have been pointed out to you already, but watch your their/there/they\'re usage.
Their=the possessive form of they. Their home. Their child.
There=adverb indicating the position of an object. The forest is over there.
They\'re=conjunction of they+are. They\'re talking about werewolves again.
One big sentence altogether=They\'re looking at their house over there.

CANNOT wait for the next chapter!!!

:)

You are not going to leave us hanging with not knowing are you? Are you? This was such a great chapter. That is until the torture session at the end! PLEASE DON\'T LEAVE US WONDERING IF HARRY LIVES OR DIES!

Chapter 56 review: EVIL!!!!! I cried, and it was not a pretty sight!!!
You\'ve got me so hooked on this fiction!!! Draco telling Harry he can\'t
leave without saying good-bye...Damn, I\'m still choked up!!!
A cliff-hanger like that is just downright, inhumanly, evil!!!!

Sooooo...next chapter?

Hello, I just want to want a truly great story you have woven with Indago so far. It\'s quite compelling and unique in certain aspects. I\'m also very greatful that you updated the story every day and sometimes more than once. So I do hope that you send out chapter 57 soon as well, as chapter 56 is one truly evil cliffhanger. ^_^

i cant write you a long review right now cuz im crying and cant really think...jsut so you no i really liked that chapter really really REALLY liked it(ok i loved it lol)...i hope Harrys ok and his baby....and *hugs* PLEASE dont kill harry and end the story...that would be worse than Beneath You(i think it was that one) by Cinnamon....ill never stop crying...i wanna say that you wont do it, but then i think that you would cuz how much Harry was searten that hes baby wouldnt be infected...so i really dont no write now...hmm i guess this was pretty long...oh and before i forget lol i was refreaching the Draco/Harry page for 3 hours waiting for your update =D...than i gave up and started to read a fic...then at 12:40 i refreached it again and saw that you updated =D and left the other fic...well if i dont go to sleep now then ill be up all night so i would get to read your update till either tomorrow morning(the 31) or when i get home from school on the 31...*hugs* and again PLEASE dont kill him *puppy eyes*...and again great chapter =) (typing all of that made me feel better by the way, not crying anymore, just sad)

Noooooooooo!!! Oh my god, what a place to leave it, I have tears and I need to know what comes next, please come back and put me out of my misery. Just as Draco and Harry are discovering each other with love this has to happen, you\'re brilliant. Can\'t wait for more

Hugs

Kat

\"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!\" *crys* \"the suspence!!!!\" *sniffs and sits in a corner to wait*