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A friend of mine pointed me in the way of this particular piece. I was skeptical at first as I am not a typical fan of the Draco/Harry pairing, but this one has truly surprised me! I am amazed at the skill in which the intricate patterns of the story are woven and I have enjoyed the courtship of the two magical beings. Kudos to you!

Okay...where to start...First off, I'm not one for slash, but I saw this listed on a recommended list and decided to have a peak. Very interesting beginning. I soon found myself completely enthralled and yes, read the whole thing in one day (much to the chagrin of my children who kept demanding my attention). Alas, I have finished and its 1am. Anyways, as I was saying...there are a couple areas that I lost my understanding for what was going on, but soon found myself in the right again and found this story very appealing. It is well written and seems very well thought out and planned. I do hate that the child was not to be...the next to last chapter had me tears...however, I understand the importance of it all. As I was bookmarking your profile, I noticed that there were 1999 reviews to this. And how could I possibly log off knowing I didn't help you break an even 2000. Well, I suppose I'll reborn tomorrow and perhaps part 3 the next day. Ta Ta

For what I've read so far, this is not at all like the true characters would have behaved in these circumstances. Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore, or Harry himself, even under Dracos effects would not allow Harry this embarrasment before his friends, let alone the entire school. I think I would do some major editing to make this story more believable. The story theme is good, but anyone who has read any Harry Potter books know this would not be allowed by the headmaster, professors, nor the majority of the students, ministry laws be damned. Ron, Hermione, or any other Gryphs would have already hexed both Dracos and Snapes balls off over these public actions. If not in public, they would have already gotten even somehow or another to show both Snape, and Draco they wont get what they want at all. As a matter of fact, Dumbledore could now easily fire Snape and expell Draco over assulting Harry. For what's happened so far, Harry would commit suicide before letting this continue any further. If you want to make this and the other stories a good story and believeable, your going to have to give the characters some backbone and drop all the too-much submissive stuff pretty quickly.

Sincerely,

MightyGryffindor

The only thing I really wanna say about this fic is that it's sooo friggin' awesome; i'm totally hooked to HP fandom. I'm a sucker for master/slave fanfics, so this is definitely one of my favs. I'm really glad that you decided to write sequels to Indago *squeals in joy WeEEEEE* thanxs sooo much. There are happy tears when draco kills his own child for harry, i mean only to save harry of course but it's sooo sad and heart-warming at the same time. I hope they'll have happy family of Malfoys in the future sequels. Can't wait to read more *hurrys off to read the sequels* Ja ne.

That was great I laugh all thru Harry's PMS. I've been their man. The anger and the tears being a woman sucks sometimes. But we have the power we just let the men think they do.

so will Harry ever find out?

No don't go. The werewolves. Don't prove Trelawny right.

But how? Didn't he take that potion?

That's what they think. Heh hehe. I like where this is going.

Maybe I am a bit late for reviewing - after you have finished this and even the sequel - but I just found this piece out and managed to finish in less than 2 days - really a good effort made!

Well, this piece is really nice and contained so many twists and turns - and I love the idea of equal and shared relationship, I believed Draco did learn a lot then...

Waste no more time and move on to sequel then...