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by lojenn

person Rebecca R
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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*tears*
how.. can ... this ...be ...
Noo i will not accept it i will wait untill the next chapter so that i am certaiin that he is.. dead!
you are still my favorite!
Oh btw i cried my heart out!
person cve
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM

ARGHH! How could you leave it there? You\'ve got us dancing to your tune, don\'t you, desperately awaiting your next chapter. It\'s a holiday here in the US, you can update again tonight can\'t you? *PLEASE* I don\'t normally beg, because I don\'t even write fiction in this genre, but you\'ve got me hooked. What happens to Harry and the baby?


best regards--


cve
person somebody
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
H-how could you leave it there!!!!!!!!!!!?????????!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! update soon, I have to know what happens to Harry. Draco cried.........hmmmmm
person Sens
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops* Well wasn\'t that a surprise? I\'m not sure whether this is the end or not, but either
way, it was exceedingly shocking our little hero didn\'t pull through. Wow. I\'ll keep checking any
ways. I\'m sure there are tons of hearts broken right now. Ah, no matter, I\'m going to do some
thing special for you. You are going to get... Fan Art!!! That\'s right, for today only, you\'ll be able
to order your own snapshot of the fabulous melodramatic rollercoaster we\'ve all been riding for
the past month! So I have a few questions, how long exactly is Malfoy\'s hair and is it perfectly
straight, like I would expect it to be, or is it wonderfully wavy and full, the classic GQ model. Love
for you for eternity, and I hope to read the next segment. *crossing fingers and hoping for a
great ending*
person Sam
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was the cookie (or what was the sweet?) that Severus gave him...isn\'t it?

When Severus gave it to him I waited all the time for something to happen...

he didn\'t want to risk Harry and so he put something into the meal to kill the child....

poor Harry...
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff! UPDate soon please!
I cant wait...I am literally dying for my nightly dose of Indago!
YOu\'ve got me addicted to this!
:(
I cant wait for it!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
person Diana
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK. i\'M NOT GOING TO YELL BECASUE I HAVE FAITH IN YOU! lol j/p. i loved how you made snape poke fun at harry\'s eating...he made him eat without looking like he cared too much...good job! adn i thought it was adorable how when lucius threathened draco he was like \"he wont touch you\" i can imagine him reaching over and rubbing harry\'s arms to soother him....soo cute! whatever decision you make i will accept...it would be better if they lived....i hope were not nearing to the end of the story...i love this story...adn couldnt live without it...all my love

Diana
person Storm
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, I hope that the healers manage to get the operation done before it kills Harry. I hope it follows the way I think it will and doesn\'t end like this. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter, keep up the good work.
person MOI
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was reading the story, and I was almost to the end. I was thinking: what shall my review be today? I had decided to
say I was becoming more and more enamoured of Draco as the story progressed. But no. NO! You had to go and kill
Harry in the last couple paragraphs. That was a wonderful scene- the emotions were very well done. Don\'t you *dare*
go off to Las Vegas again and leave this here.
person twisteds_mini
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
............ I am crying right now.
Please let Harry be okay.


~Twisteds