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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story overall! I loved it....the only thing I was not terribly happy about was the ending! I mean, that was most unexpected to just have it end like that, I was totally unprepared to see \'The end\' right there!
What I was expecting were some more angsty moments concerning Harry\'s and the baby\'s faith. I my mind, Harry would have been right and the baby fine. And together with Draco and his friends, Harry would have made it savely throught the pregnancy, until he was almost due. Then some sort of complication would arise forcing the baby to be born earlier with some angsty moment inserted there. In the end, things would turn out alright and it would have been a happy ending!
You know...I think I am sticking with my own ending if you don\'t mind...
What I was expecting were some more angsty moments concerning Harry\'s and the baby\'s faith. I my mind, Harry would have been right and the baby fine. And together with Draco and his friends, Harry would have made it savely throught the pregnancy, until he was almost due. Then some sort of complication would arise forcing the baby to be born earlier with some angsty moment inserted there. In the end, things would turn out alright and it would have been a happy ending!
You know...I think I am sticking with my own ending if you don\'t mind...
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! I can\'t believe it\'s over! I already miss this fic so much! But congratulations. this one is definetly a classic one... Good severus doing what is right!! Ah.. i feel so emotional right now.. i\'ll review again another day... Hugs!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, it\'s over *cries*, but I have to say that you ended it wonderfully. This fic has been a joy to read.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hugs author* thank you so much for sharing this story with us... it made my day everytime there was an update... and i can truely say that you had me going a few times where i nearly lost sleep waiting for the next update... it is amazing.. you are amazing... please write us something else amazing... so we can share this wonderful journey with you again.
thank you again so much.
your loyal reviewer minion,
LPhoenix
thank you again so much.
your loyal reviewer minion,
LPhoenix
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For all of us who\'ve been slaves to your prose...I will ask quite humbly:
Please, an epilogue...Just one chapter...with Harry, Draco, and their brood...
I\'d love to see the halls of Hogwarts ring with Potter-Malfoy kith and kin
while teasing Snape unmercifully. Please, oh, pretty please???
After all, we have to make certain Harry never broke his promise to Draco, don\'t we????
Once again, thank your for your prose, and for sharing it with so many of us!!!
Please, an epilogue...Just one chapter...with Harry, Draco, and their brood...
I\'d love to see the halls of Hogwarts ring with Potter-Malfoy kith and kin
while teasing Snape unmercifully. Please, oh, pretty please???
After all, we have to make certain Harry never broke his promise to Draco, don\'t we????
Once again, thank your for your prose, and for sharing it with so many of us!!!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way to go, I\'ll be crying myself to sleep tonight. I\'m sorry that Harry had to lose the baby, but it was riddled with lycathropy and it was for the best. I absolutely loved Draco. I\'m so sad that the story\'s done. I\'ve been checking this site everyday for so long now that I\'m not sure what could compare to my excitement when I saw another chapter had been posted. You did a great job and should be proud of yourself. Congrats.....but I do wish that there was a short chapter to see what they are like together after school...are they able to have more kids, does Draco become over protective, etc. Just my curious mind working
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought perhaps Snape put something in Harry\'s food. I am so bummed that this story is done!!!!! It has been alittle jolt of excitment to see a new post everyday. Please do a sequel.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Tear: I am sorry to see it end, but it was worth the pain. I didn\'t see it coming either, with the biscuit.
I truly enjoyed this story, from tip to tail.
If your future writing is to be this enthralling, I look forward to reading more.
I truly enjoyed this story, from tip to tail.
If your future writing is to be this enthralling, I look forward to reading more.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O...........Gods, I hate cliffys.................you meanie.................
Ja ne
Your.Evil.
Miss War-chan
Ja ne
Your.Evil.
Miss War-chan
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its like 2:45 am in the mourning and im like omg you must update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!! Don\'t let harry die not when him and draco finally got back together and all!!! *looking at the computer teary eyed* UPDATE SOONNNN OR BETTER YET NOW!!! Lol lalalallalalala love your story my favorite one!!!!1