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for Indago

by lojenn

person kaji11
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Please tel me you\'ll write a sequel please! SEQUEL SEQUEL.....SEQUEL!
person Menecarkawan
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, the baby died, but Harry and Draco love each other and shall stay together until death do they part, yes? And Snape killed the baby... good thing too, all things considered. Nice story.
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those two awful awful words. Congradulations on a completed wonderful piece of fiction. I very much enjoyed it. And while I know it\'s your perogative, I can\'t help but join the masses and ask for some type of continuance, epilogue, future one-shot, sequel. One more time, Well done!
person mellebelle
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply fabulous, though i wish it wasn\'t over. Thank you for writing this, it is beautiful!
person SilverPhoenix
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA so he did live :D yays...and Serverus killed the baby...and it was Dracos hehe....oh you must make a sequel to this!!! one where Harry finds out that Snape killed the baby...or something i dunno but you just have to *crys*...it cant be over it really cant *crys some more* now what am i gonna read every night(i tryed so hard last night to say up and read this, but past out at 9:30) ill have nothing now *crys* but all of the WIPs that i read, but they dont update everyday like it....oh now that i got that out...i really really REALLY loved this fic and i really cant believe its over but it was a great ending Happy and Sad and YAY Draco cryed..even if it was jsut one tear but still...well i must get ready for school now....again great story it was the best and i really hope that you make a sequel(and just remember, the sequels usually have more reviews than the first ;))
person ningchan
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!
THAT ROCKED!
you update well my friend!
at first i wasnt gonna read this as it was h/d/s but am glad i decided to read it for a laugh! it was brill!
had me hanging on the edge thoes last few chapters!
if you feel the urge to wite a sequal pleasepleaseplease let me know!
love ning
person Alexa
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This end of this story is the end of an era, indeed. :-)
Tears ans smiles, and waiting for your next creation.
person Karen
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Loved your story! Its been the best H/D I\'ve read in a looooong time. However, I do feel like the last few chapters were a bit rushed though.
I feel that perhaps the climax of the story deserved a few more chapters. I may just be biased though as I cant believe I wont be able to read
your daily updates! :(
Maybe you can create a fluffy sequel, the world you have created has so much potential, especially with the creature laws.

Anyway, even if you dont write a sequel, I shall be looking out for some more of your fantastic writing, hope I dont have to wait too long! :P

Karen
person Bright One
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for such a wonderful story! I don\'t suppose I could convince you to do a one-shot look at Draco and Harry in the future. Maybe with all of the children? Eitehr way, thank you again and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
person PadfootLivesOn
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe I had to read the last part of the chapter twice. I had no idea at first what you ment with \"Was it in his drink?\" and then Snape said \"No. The biscuit.\" I was like what to heck are you on about...lol, but then I remembered the potion the could be used to kill/miscarrge the baby. I had to go to the chapter before last and re-read that, but yeah I get it now. Very sneaky of Snape, but worth it in the end. You know I had no idea that this was gonna be the last chapter, but this ending was perfect. It really is. Well I haven\'t read such a good story in a very long time. I commend you on a job very very well done. I hope to read more of you stories in the *cough*near*cough* future....Again this was the best!!!

Cheers,
Pamela^_^