rate_review Reviews

Wow, I love your story ^_^ I just got linked here from the Closet forum. No idea how long you\'ve been writing this for, but, wow! It\'s awesome. You seem to have had some collisions with the spellCheck monster, but Word does that :P it ought to have a context-check function.

And \"Contend with their progeny\" made me giggle. ^_^

Just letting you know you rock, sorry for the lack of constructive criticism, but then the story\'s finished anyway, so that\'s okay.

Cheers,

Maggie.

Ok I am very confused I am really shocked that you ended it the way you did. I almost got the impression that you just didn\'t want to write anymore. Now dont take that as an insult cause you know I love this story and all that you put in to it so thats why I felt I just had to vioce this concern. This last chapter was very good but there definatly could have been more to sort of give things more finality. Since you already stated those two dreadful words I really hope that you give us dedicaded fans an epiloge to this one, it can even be a look into the future of those two or something. Just something more real and definatly happier, plus we never did get to hear Draco actually say he loved Harry or see the relationship, sexually, turn around and not be so one sided. That would have definatly been a great way to end it. Harry making love to Draco, Draco telling Harry he loves him and the promising future of a new baby to raise to make them complete. Of course again this would be a future scene,maybe during the next Lustrum, hence in the epologe. Any way please think about it and please please please post one and very soon I love this story and really want to see it have great finish, and not to hurt your feelings, but that one just kind of fizzeled out. You are way better than that! And you story deserves better than that. Iwill check often, so please email me if you dont plan on doing it so I wont bother. Thanks!

I love the story and I am sad to see it end and I was wondering if you are by chance going to write a sequal cause I know we are all begging for one....please keep us all updated on your next plans....

A Fan~
Lily

I wasn\'t suppose to start reading until I saw a complete sign on the story...but my curiostiy got out of hand...
after just reading one chapter...I think it was chapter 40...I was addicted...
From then on...I had to check AFF daily for your updates...even with my exams looming I just had to check out your updates.
I was soo pissed off with the way Draco treated Harry in the beginning...
then I started to forgive him when he was so sweet to Harry...
You made my emotions like yo-yo...my liking of Draco for a month or so was all on how you made Draco...seriously.


Enough on how I got hooked on your story.
It was a wonderful and beautifully written story.
However I was very sad and disappointed with the ending...but I guess not every story has a happy ending.
I hope you will write a sequel to this...and maybe Harry will have a happier life in it.


Oh yes, I agree with the other reviewers, you should post more stories.
There are a lot of good plots out there, but what makes you different is the way you write and portray the story.
You gave each character life, and made the readers feel what they are feeling(refer to first paragraph on effects on readers emotions).


Anyway, you have my vote on all time best writer.
I do hope to see future works of yours.
Sorry to not have reviewed earlier, I just finished my exams....not a very good apolagy I know, but I just wanted you to know I really love this story.

Write On!!!!

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...t....th....that\'s..........the end??????????

*sniffles* an end to one of the best stories on here.....

*bursts into tears* that sucks....................

*sniffles* great story..........I just wish............it wasn\'t over already........

*runs away crying*

Wonderful ending! I thought you were going to kill Harry off! An amazing story from start to finish, and a wonderful new magical creature for the Harry potter fandom!

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That was a great ending. I wasn\'t sure how you were going to do it, but you made it perfect, and not even sickingly fluffy. You know, I find it ironic that I chose to review it the DAY before it was finished. I never would have expected that. Well, thank you for being prompt. If you hadn\'t been a good little author and updated the next day, then I might have never read the ending. Thank you. I sincerely wish you good luck with your life and your writing.
Until we meet again,
Diamondkitten

This story has got to be the best that i have read on this whole site, and thats saying something because ive read alot. Its a shame its finished, but i hope you write one just as good soon. Katx

Sequel PLEASE!!! I really want to know what happens when the finally do have a baby that survives!!!