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for Indago

by lojenn

person sharon
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I guess Im dumb or something but I read this late last night and I couldnt understand it then and I this morning still can make no real sense of the part where snape and dumbledore have their conversation. Is snape with them? Has it been six years from the loss of the baby? Then it sounds as if their still at the school and looking forward to teaching up and coming children from the sweethearts, Im confused. sorry
person moi
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
over already!!! NOOOO!! :( if u make a sequel it would be great... but then agaIn most people say that sequels ruin the original sotry... but then again.. i want u to continue this story!! :(
person Bladefire
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* it\'s over? I\'m gonna miss this story.
Out of curiosity are you going to do a sequel? *looks hopeful*
If not it\'s okay. I\'ll just read it over again. ^_^
person anon
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
???????
person silver_raynefall
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Looks around frantically* Wh-what? It\'s over? *teardrop* Your story was one of the best I\'ve ever read. I\'m actually sad to see it go. *wanders off to mourn somewhere*
person foxfire
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"wow,...its the end,.... i,....cant,....believe,.......*sniff*,..an he losses the baby too,....and i wasnt even expecting the whole biscut thing,......................i congragulate you on truly being a fanfastic writer,..this story is trulyy one of the best i have ever read and never lacked anything,.... i will most sertantly keep a look out for your next storie,...and,.....*tackles* i love you!! and i thank you so much for writing such a fantastic story!!!!,..now i must run away to balll my eyes out with its closher!! *runs away sobbing*
person MOI
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s the middle of the night (here, that is. Well, maybe it\'s more like one...) and I was thinking to myself: I\'ll just check to see if
the next chappie\'s been posted, because she\'s on West Coast time and all. So I discover there\'s another chappie and I\'m ecstatic.
Why? Because I love this story! I\'ve been addicted since I discovered it. That was me, overloading the servers so I wouldn\'t miss
the next update. So what do I uncover, when my nagging-for-sleep eyes scroll down? The End! As in, the end of of all my hopes
and dreams and the makings of my infinite sadness. *sobs brokenly* Gone, all gone! It has been a wonderful story, and I have
been continually impressed with your inventiveness as well as your dedication to it. It has been a pleasure to read, and I am so
glad I happened upon it. Thank you. I present you with your laurels.

So, can I draw you fan art too? Nevermind, I\'ll just send it along... :)
person mysticsong
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A -very- good story . . . if a rather abrupt ending.
person WILDKATBLU
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Any chance for a sequel?
person TeeDee
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...

This is an amazing ending to an amazing piece of writing. I\'m going to miss checking twice each day for when the next update came for it. *Siiiighs* But it was perfect!

Mmmmmmmmmmm! I LOVE IT!

And what was this about a fetus changing, hm? It seems poor, dear Severus couldn\'t help but be protective of the little guy, no matter what he said about allowing Harry to make his own choices, stupid or not!

Potion in his biscuit. Heh.

Good! I like this. No, I love this. It\'s beautiful!