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for Indago

by lojenn

person icestar
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:glares half-force at dumbledore: thats sneaky... bad barmy old coot. :P

nice story... so many chapters @_@;;;;;

anyways, very nice :thumbs up:
person War-chan
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
((O.O))..............As I said/typed before......you meanie!!!! *cries in slience* I saw what you did *pionts finger while shaking it*, at the beggining of the last chapter, you tryed to make us all think that you just went and killed poor Potter off! I was in tears till I read that HE WAS ALIEVE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Grrrrrr..........damn you for tricking me!!!!! I will forever have love for this great story =^_^=!!!!!!!! Now off I am to see if I like your other story(s?) as much as I liked this one!!!!!!!!

Ja ne
*BigGrin*
Miss War-chan ^_^
person Fairy1
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a fantastic story! I have been following it from the very start and I can\'t believe it\'s finished! That was sly of Severus to put the abortion potion in the biscuit! That was a twist i hadn\'t been expecting! I really can\'t believe there will be no more chapters! You have to write a sequel! Thanks so much for this enjoyable read.
person Frikin Carefree
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought i\'d never see the day...
Well i guess this is good bye...
and it\'s time for me to give you a real review.
this Story was... perfect i can\'t find any other words to describe it.
it kept me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update,
and i never would of made it if you hadn\'t been updating daily
(actually lately i can\'t seem to make it through the day either,
so thank goodness thats over). Your story is definitely my favoritre
and believe me i have read plenty of draco/harry fics and none of
them come close to your story. your in a league of your own and
you should be proud the you wrote such an awesome story that
would have taken most years.

Alright enough of that now i can yell at you.
They did WHAT to the biscut?
i definitley wouldn\'t of guessed.
Why did you kill the baby? i was naming it and everything.
Can\'t i get an epilouge for something about harry and draco\'s
life after school you kind of left us hanging.
I\'ll even go for an alternate ending where the baby is indago.
not saying you ending was bad i just would like to know what would
of happened if the baby had lived. I just don\'t feel like using my
imagination (lazy). And again congradulations( I hope i spelled that right)
you\'ve written one of the best fanfics ever.

Take care,

~*~Frikin*Carefree~*~

P.S. Feel free to write any other stories,
i\'ll most likely be waiting for you to.
person inumoon3
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have to write a sequel! I\'m dying to know if they have another baby! Oh can you please write a sequel...the story\'s to good not to have a sequel! Update soon, hope to read more from you soon; a job well done!!!!!
person Storm
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that last chapter was just...Wow! The beginning kept me in this horrible apprehension and then you pulled out the winning card. this was a truly magnificent ending to an absolutley wonderful story. I loved this story. You are a great writer and I can\'t wait to start reading your next story.
person DM
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! WHAT AN END!!!

Your writing style is fantastic!!!!

But do you plan a sequel???? or maybe an epilogue or something, I just want to see Draco and Harry with their child and develop a little more in their relationship now that they know they love each other, PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Bye

DM
person k
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...THAT was the best chapter in the whole story!! First I thought Harry had died, and then not, and then you throw me that ending...gah! I have to say you answered enough questions, while leaving just a few to keep the readers on their toes even after they have finished the story! Definetly one of the best HP fics I\'ve read.
I\'ll be very interested in reading anything you write in the future!
k
person Ice\'is Blue
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Well, I have to say, I was surprised to see \'The End.\' The story seemed to have a few more directions it could go, but overall, it\'s an admirable work. Brava.
person hpgryffin
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just started to read this story and was instantly amazed at how prolific you are. You update quite fast too. Thank you so much for sharing the story with all of us. We really, really appreciate it. You are one hell of a fanfic author. The story was a joy to ride from day one. So here\'s hoping you more fic writing days so we could indulge in them in bliss.

Again thanks and until the next story!