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for Indago

by lojenn

person acr
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a great writing style. Your stories are interesting, the dialogue is good, and you avoid rambling.

But really, your chapters are TOO SHORT! You are SUCH an EVIL TEASE! :)

I\'m really interested in learning more about this species. I hope Harry doesn\'t remain such a wimp around Malfoy (and presumably snape) forever.

Is Voldemort dead?
person acr
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was really hoping to see the conversation between Snape and Draco after the incident in the hall.
person LPhoenix
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that your story has my attention. keep on with the updates! :)