rate_review Reviews

This is just getting better and better. I love the fact that you are putting some thought into writing the story and not just having an agressive throwing a submissive up against the wall...well obviously they did that once but that was a plot device and not the whole story...so that couldn\'t be helped. At any rate, very good job you have done there.

Still a great story! When are we going to see some more Draco/Harry interactions though?

aww when is the next chapter coming out
please be soon

How you keep me craving more! I am most eager to wrap myself in your shadows.

more more more

You cannot understand the glee I feel when I see this story updated. I swear my heart just jumps into my throat, and I start practically bouncing where I sit. It\'s so AMAZING!

I am absolutely floored by your writing and the plot you are crafting, it\'s just kind of weaving around us, seriously trapping us readers within your amazing web. I cannot WAIT to see what happens next, though I\'m almost anxious about the whole Malfoy thing. I can just see it.... he\'s denied access to Harry so long, he\'ll probably go totally psycho next time he sees him. I could only imagine!

As for how in-character your characters are.... wow. No kidding here. I absolutely love your Ron and Hermione ((And that Dumbledore? BRILLIANT!)) and I adore your Harry. I am so used to reading fandom Harry that I actually found myself reviewing the first book today ((The fact that I have an exam in Children\'s Literature tommorrow has nothing to do with it, I swear......)) and then read this, and I was impressed with how well you captured *real* Harry, and not fandom Harry. I really appreciate that. I realize, of course, that Draco is acting a bit odd, what with the whole Indago thing, but I love the fact that despite the fact that he\'s basically gone on a testosterone trip and wants rather badly to claim Harry as his ((Which is so adorable, how confused Harry is!)) he\'s still *Draco Malfoy*, not some blonde waif that merely looks like my beloved pointy faced prat. Too many fanfic authors turn him into their perfect boyfriend, just with the face of Tom Felton, and Tom Felton is NOT Draco. So that\'s one of my pet peeves, and you have avoided that so well, instead sticking to CANON DRACO! YAY!

I realize that this is a really long review, but I AM a University English major. I plan to be an English teacher, and a novelist. I only review stories I really like, and I only give really, really good responses to stories I deem worthy. So.... I deem this one exceedingly worthy! You have captured the characters, you have written an amazing yarn, and I nearly leap of my chair with excitement every time I see it\'s updated. Keep up the absolutely incredible work!

Really good, I\'m getting a kick out of sub!Harry. Very intense.

When will they meet again? and how come Snape didn\'t react? Is this why he put the Grifs in the back of the room and Harry on the back of them all? Hey, it makes sense!

Please up date.

I really must say...your story is intriguing...I\'m hooked, and you barely have 4 chapters+a prologue in...I\'m quite looking forward to Snape\'s reaction to Harry\'s...condition...and I am really anxious to see how Draco acts when he next sees Harry. Also...I got to wondering...Draco seems to want Harry for HIS, and *only* his...what about SNAPE? When/IF Snape decides that he too wants Harry, how will greedy little Draco react? Will there be competition? I\'m getting that sense, as I don\'t see EITHER men as ones who are too open to the idea of \'sharing\' what they percieve as *theirs*...mmm...please update soon...I want to know what happens next...

OHHHH The plot thickens. I can\'t wait to see how you Bring Snape into the picture and how Draco comes back. I really want to know what they are doing with him and how they can keep him away for so long. Please update soon. Love this story

dont stop! update soon!