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by lojenn

person darknessmiko
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good....will you update soon? And what is with the Severus/Draco/Harry thing? I have an idea...
update soon!

Laika de Lioncourt...always and forever Darknessmiko
person acr
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, good chapter. Lucius being a bastard, Draco being all dominating...excellent. Again, though...you are an EVIL TEASE!!! Hoping you\'ll post another chap. tonight.
person Lil Angel
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just had to leave off with a cliffy. Well I need a favor. Hurry up and finish with the next chapter, I\'m counting on it.
person Queen mAlice
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why? Why must you leave us hanging like this?

Why? Why are the chapters so short?

I really love the story!
person Demon18
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i\'m really enjoying your story. Um, my only problem is that the chapters are maybe a little too short? Don\'t wanna sound demanding but maybe you could lengthen them a bit.
person Sarryn
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again I am inextricably caught within the organic weft of your creativity. Cannot wait for more.
person Closet Skeleton
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am becoming more and more enthralled with this story every time you update. Tonight I found myself squealing when I discovered that you had updated, and let me assure you, I do [i]not[/i] squeal.

This is what your story is doing to me. Oh my, that was an absolutely brilliant ploy on Lucius\' part - the Court Order to prevent the restraining? BRILLIANT! I don\'t know if I ever would have thought of that. I bow to your superior writing skill.

I should also like to point out that yours is the only story here in which I repeatedly go back to reread chapters over and over again. It is so incredibly well written that I can\'t resist - it\'s like reliving a fine moment of your life.

You continue to amaze me, as always.
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great stuff
keep it up
sub harry rocks
i love harrycentric fics
im talkng too much aint i?
just keeep updating
please
thanks
person robyn
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOhh mating season now I like the sound of that . Iam so into this story it isnt funny.
Iam also pleased that you update so quickly. Iam almost tempted to not check for a
couple of days so I will have more to read when I do look.Lucky me Iam on the late
shift at work this week so I wont be able to check to often.Iam hoping to have lots to
read when I can get back on. ONce again exellent story it has made my weekend.
Robyn
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome!!!!!
can not wait for you to update
please please please
update soon