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for Indago

by lojenn

person Nicole
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see you forgot a little thing at the end.
The part where you say when you will start the sequel.
I\'m willing to give you a week off b/c i\'s that nice.
I\'m not joking either you can\'t leave this. You have made
Such an amazingly intricate story that is more real than
the books. You\'ve done something truly amazing and it
would be doing us the readers wrong if you do not continue.
You have everyone on this website that reads slash
hooked and you have to do more. I will love your new story
i\'m sure but it\'s not the same. Please truly think about a
sequel. I only know of about 5 authors that have been able in
my opinion to pass jk and give the characters real life.
You are one of them. Thank you for giving us something so wonderful.
person Anon
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can you amke a sequal?

Diana
person ura
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew that you would not betray your readers and keep Harry alive!
I am sad about the baby. I have already envisioned little blond boy running around,
but Harry and Draco will have other kids, right?

It is so sad that the story is over. What am I going to wait for now every night?

It would be cool of you added an epilogue describing what happened to Harry and Draco in a few years.
But it is up to you, of course.

Anyway, you created a truly enjoyable story. I love reading it. Thank you so much for that!
Please continue to write.

If you have an author alert list about your new stories, please add me in.
Good luck with your other endeavors!

person IrIdeScEnT
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have got to be kidding me. No more Indago?!?! How do you expect me to LIVE...I think you should make a sequel. But that\'s just wishful thinking.....seriously though, how do you expect me to live without an Indago chapter to read everyday. Ugh, this is so going to kill me.

Well.....I LOVED YOU STORY. I loved it from the beginning. Very good. You are a GREAT writer. Keep up the good work
person miku
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou so much for writing this!!! It\'s been an utter pleasure to read, I look forward to reading your other stories!!! xxx
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* You had me scared there and tears were running down my face when Harry called out to Draco. Then I grinned the whole time. Severus made Harry miscarry. Oh thank goodness! The baby would have killed him. Oh I loved this! Adored it and looked for it everyday! I hate that it had to end. Fantastic story! I look forward to more!
person kneazler
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear LDurham,
You write with great compassion. I don\'t normally get so serious about fanfic, but your writing is, frankly, addictive. I have a side note to tell you about two facets of your compassionate work. First, as a juvenile diabetic, you hit somewhere in the core of me with the sugar-fix-needing Harry. It is hard to explain entirely, but you seem to have an \"inside view\" of what insulin reactions can be like. You even used the language that I have been so familiar with my entire life: \"emergency\" sugar and so on. I have no clue whether you consciously were writing from experience or just reached out into the world and hit upon the idea through pure intuition. Either way, I commend you. Second, you seem to understand the internal psychology of cats (I know about it from personal experience). Do you believe in totem-spirits? It is a Native American concept (also in many cultures worldwide) that people have animal spirit families, sort of...I cannot explain it adequately. You may have one that you aren\'t consciously aware of. I know that what I have just stated is odd to say the least. I am not good at explaining the concept as I do not fully understand it. But I am sincerely happy with your story. Good hearts and good minds make good stories, or so I have found.
person ura
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I attach my e-mail in case you have an author alert list: ura_hd@hotmail.com

Also I want to mention that I absolutely loved Draco\'s and Harry\'s confession in love to each other.
It was so untraditional and unusual, but extremely sincere and profound. It was also very them.
I love their characters as created by you.

An epilogue, please?

person Nesikin
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...finished. Great story, seriously. There were times I was wondering back at the beginning just where it was all going, but I kept reading and I\'m damned glad I did. You did a stupendous (that\'s right!) job with this story. You should be very proud of yourself!

-Nesi
person Missi
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just have to say that Indago is just about the coolest magical being story I\'ve read, umm, ever. I really like this story, I love the way you ended it, and I just love it in general.