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by lojenn

person chantalmlafoy
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHhh......... You can leave us hanging! UPDATE NOW! lol.

I need more.
person Queen mAlice
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
still absolutly loving the story! Please post soonish!
person Kathy
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is Harry giving up that easily? Seems a little out of character. Also, can\'t Harry drink the Caratare root potion to inhibit his instinct? The potion inhibits an Indago\'s instincts right; the violence of a Supero. If it works for a Supero then what\'s to stop it from working for a Subicio? It can stop Harry\'s instinct of automatically obeying the Supero. If that\'s the case then he just needs to wait and avoid Malfoy for a few months. Then even if Malfoy does pursue him, he will have to work to win Harry over, he just won\'t lie down and allow Malfoy to step all over him. That might actually make the ensuing relationship more interesting.

Well, I\'m looking forward to seeing how you plan to proceed with this story. Hope you update soon. :)
person Death in a Pink Boa
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You update like crazy.
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CURSES!!!!! Another blasted cliffhanger!!! (and it was just getting good!)
If you were in front of me right now, I would throttle you half to death (only joking of course...heheheh..or am i?)
neways, please please please please please please
update SOON!!!
lots of love babe!
person laimerkian
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! love your story, but have a few questions. Does Harry really beleive that life is worth living the way Hermione described? Is it realistic? I am frankly surprised that he would just go along, noone wants to be beaten all the time, raped, and live a life with no love and only humiliation. Even if the pheromones would drug him, I find it hard to believe anyone would accept this beforehand. He did go through harder things with Voldemort, and although I can understand him being tired of fighting, it is the strength of character this implies which makes me question your line of thinking. I hope this is merely Harry having doubts about lif in general, but what he is suggesting would be slavery, worse since he is made to feel pleasure in serving.
a confused harry fan
k
person LPhoenix
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands dancing around the room* OH OH OH OH I\"M SO EXCITED!!!!!!!! *stops looking at you expectantly* more?? now??
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy moly! Harry went to Draco willingly. I\'m afraid he missed some things in his deal. *closes eyes* I hope Harry knows what he\'s doing. Can\'t wait for chapter 12!
person Manson
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee! Great story.

Is Snape going to intervene in what Draco has in store for Harry? Will Draco keep his word? I can\'t see him doing that, spiteful little boy that he is
person acr
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I was all set to see the Gryffindor Anti-Draco security system! But still, a good chapter.

It would be nice if Harry had a few surprises for Draco and Snape, though.

I was kind of hoping he\'d go get himself a Law Wizard and have a magical contract.

Anyway, great fic!