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by lojenn

person fragonknight01
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That had better have been the worst of it or I am going to quit reading. Poor Harry...
person Marley
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All i can coherently say at this moment is wow. Gah is also high on the list. Wonderful, keep up the good work.
person Lilblacknitecat
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating ur chapters soo fast!! it keeps your fans loving u and ur story even more ^.~ hehe ohh...I wondering what is gonna happen next now that Harry knows he can withstand Draco\'s sexiness o^.^o I bet you a shinny penny that Draco won\'t like that one bit, and he will go after Harry!! Go on and get more into the good stuff!! umm...*blush* pleaseee??
person PrincessDracona
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I love the story so far, very unique story line. But I am one of those leave Harry alone people and really hope we get to see Dracos soft and loveing side soon. Maybe even a little or alot of guilt for the way he is treating his Harry. I know right now maybe he cant help it but I also know that he is strong enough to over come that if he truly wanted to and truly loved. I dont mind if you tourture Harry for a while just so long as it ends up with a very repentent Draco who is willing to do anything to make up for it. But its your story and Im sure it will be good which ever way you choose to go.
person Closet Skeleton
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m baaack...

In any case, I know you\'re getting alot of flack from readers who are panicking about this Harry torture. For myself, I\'m not a big fan of Harry-Hurt, but I know *why*you\'re doing it, what you intend to do with it, and for that reason, I found this amazing. It *is* so typically Harry, despite the floaty feeling. That would be why there is the whole \"quasi-imperio\" thing. That explains why Harry can resist Imperio, after all - he\'s genetically predisposed to being under certain controls, and he\'s just so darn stubborn, he won\'t put with any of them.

As well, some people might go \"But Draco raped him!\" but it\'s like Draco said earlier - it *wasn\'t* rape. Granted, Harry wasn\'t in the best of situations, and Draco was a bastard about it, but it was *not* non-consensual - Harry was desperately trying to please Draco throughout the whole thing. I thought that was brilliant - it had all the characteristics of rape ((a genre I tend to avoid like the plague as a general rule)) but still managed to work around it due to the whole Superio/Subicio thing. Which is clever. I am very much impressed.

And I do agree with some of the other reviewers ((Yes, I am a nerd. I am living vicariously through you and have as such read all the reviews for your story. Which is alot of reviews.)) that I am very curious to see what Snape intends to do, and how he would act. I assume as an adult, that he would have more control, but maybe that just means he\'d be more violent if he ever gave in. I\'m very intruiged. I\'m also interested in how Draco\'s going to react when he discovers Harry gone - *and* there\'s still the issue of mating season.... does that mean that Draco\'s influence bubble ((as I call the range of the pheremones)) expands to the point where Harry pretty much comes begging? That\'s what I had figured. Hmm. I am intruiged.

Definently hoping that Draco will learn not to be *quite* so violent too, but maybe that\'s just because I\'m a sucker for a sweet but still dominant Draco.

Anyways, keep up the amazing work. Can\'t wait to see what you do next.
person Eowyns elioxure
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Cheese! NO! Please tell me Draco gets better he has to. That was so mean poor Harry!

*Eowyns elixure
person icestar
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gyah! coward! ah well, he didnt know the exact terms, but dracos gonna be ticked...

poor moine and ron are gonna be ticked with him too...

nice chapter though. ^_^ hope to see more
person dlog
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far. I love submissive Harry and dom Draco. Bot is Draco a bastard though. Poor Harry. I eagerly await your next update.
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
guud job kip it up
person Priss368
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like what another reviewer said about Harry being able to kick this control by pheromone business! Thay way if Draco wants to reproduce he\'ll have to work for Harry\'s forgiveness, respect, etc. I think Draco needs to grow up & realize that what\'s happening is much more than an opportunity to get back at his \"enemy\". Snape could step in & help in this situation. I have a feeling he would be more gentle & in control of himself & teach Draco these things as well. I feel that Harry has been hurt enough in his life. He deserves a chance to be happy, loved, safe. Maybe somewhere in here Snape & Draco hear the truth about Harry\'s upbringing & begin to feel for the poor guy. Great job! Priss