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for Indago

by lojenn

person Phox
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have waited till this story ended to send you any reviews because I was afraid you would break my heart at the end of this story... and you did, but you did a wonderful job of sewing it up again. I\'m a whore for sappy endings. I want to believe in happily ever after. You made me imagine that... thank you. In fact I mention that because I felt this story flowed like a fairy tale. I hope you don\'t mind that I\'m now your official fangirl.

I loved that the story was AU, but the characters were kept so \"in\" character... even to the end. I can\'t wait to read more of your stuff! May the muses continue to bless you.
person koki
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i had read that story the whole way though and it must have been the best story on here ever writen. Congrats is in order. Beauitiful. Severus so loves them so much enough to make Harry misscary, was crying when i thought Harry was gona die, but gorgeous Severus put me at ease.
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person Kat
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED YOUR STORY! I have been reading it from beggining to end, and I loved it. I remember waiting in anticipation for the next chapter like everyday. I swear I broke into tears when I thought Harry was going to die from the child having lycanthropy. I also broke into tears when I saw he was alive. I absolutely loved this story and cant wait to see any others you write in the future. It\'s sad that this one has to end but all things come to an end. Maybe there is a seqeul to this one, I dont know, its your decision, but I cant wait to see your next story!
person Phorcys
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An Much Excellent Story, scary start you had me worried. But a good ending. Thanks for posting it up so we can read it. Now I won\'t have to check AFF everyday to see if your story has been updated. I\'ll have to find a new hobby. GREAT STORY.
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhhh *sobs uncontrallably* Hes not dead!!

WHAT THE CRAP! ITS OVER! WHYYYY!! NOOOOO!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

MORE!

That ending was NOT good enough!


Sequal!! Dear God please!!!

What am i supposed to do now? Im going crazy over here! Please write a sequal! I will do anything! Ill beta, help with ideas!
*tears* I love this story!

(wow i sound really scary)

Well you should have been a writer. You have amazing tallent and imagination. I hate you for ending the story but i love you for writing it. Looking forward to your next epic.

Love FairyPoet
person Rebecca R
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are just to terrific!
bravo! and please continue this awsome story hope full H/D try again(for a baby)
person koki
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EPILOGUE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE
YOU GOTS TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
looking through all the reviews, WWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW,
never seen so many reviews on one story well done.
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person DCfern
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Hope to read more of your work soon. Maybe a sequel at a peek into their later years.
person eeb
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!! That was a great story!!! Is there going to be a sequel? I kind of would like to see Harry at Malfoy Manor... But dude! such a moving story!!!
person viira
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh truly!! that was an awesome ending!! Too bad the baby died but the biscuit thing is so ingenious!! I will surely miss reviewing your story!! Do write more =D You\'re fantastic cuz you update real fast, I just couldn\'t get enough!!