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for Indago

by lojenn

person sharon
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story for sure. Please do us a favor and stop agonizing over folks that read a story that has your format and low and behold you hold true to your story. Your summary makes it clear just what is to be looked forward to in your story and for those of us that like a different piece of pie we like to see our famous couple in different scenerios.One thing though, it would be great if chapter fifteen was just that and not really chapter fourteen. lord knows life has enough complications that are just totally unnecessary. for those of us who check daily for our stories that are being regularly updated it makes it just a little harder to really keep track of where I really am at. Much thanks my dear and keep true to your story and dont really expect to be able please everyone because that is a natural impossibility
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For what its worth and in all my readings this has got to be the most reviews that I have ever fallen up against. I am havng a time to understand why your letting a few negative views get to you. I guess its true when they say that we just naturally hold close to ourselves the insults and overlook the praise
person slash_fiend
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is truly amazing. Its really hard to find stories that include both Harry and Draco being creatures, Draco being dominant, AND having Harry have feelings of submission. You have hit all of my plot favorites!! (Not to mention a few kinks. XD)

Brilliant story! Keep up the good work!! ^___^

schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Draco will get him. *damn that wall for being there*.
Please, don\'t let Draco be too harsh on the poor little golden boy =(
More soon?
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uncomfortable with the violence, intrigued by the dominance and the thought of a Snape/Harry/Draco, well... *pant,pant*. Okay, I\'m such a sick puppy.

More Please. LOL
person Yana
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!! please will someone help harry, he doesn\'t deserve it
person Priss368
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it sounds like Harry has earned himself a trip to the infirmary. In the meantime, I hope Draco gets a hold of himself. He seems to feel insecure in his relationship w/Harry. Doesn\'t he realize that treating Harry the way he did just makes HIM look bad & for everyone to feel sad for Harry? I hope that Draco realizes soon that what he\'s doing isn\'t working very well-neither one of them are happy with the way things are. A little softness & taking care of your mate\'s needs can go a long way!

I also read the other reviews that are out there & I agree with Closet Skeleton about more to Draco\'s story. Dom had many relevant points as well. Particularly about Draco should want Harry to come since it would enhance his scent. Maybe Draco doesn\'t know this yet (he is only a kid & doesn\'t know everything).

I really appreciate that you\'ve got so much of this fic done & that you\'re posting so frequently! Please keep it up! Priss
person greer
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wall meet Harry. Harry, wall. This guy just can\'t get a break...lol.
person chrissy
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo good. I want to know what happens next. update soon. please!!!
person lacquer
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This gets really exciting!!!!!!
*groan* a cliffie.....

Your story really makes me wait with anticipation at the next chapter/scene. Can I ask for more?????? It could have been a little bit longer though two chapters makes it reasonable I guess. I really am just used to reading long chapters.....

Continue the good work!!!