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WooHoo, Snape! =)
More soon!?

Hehe...I am also still here. I was glad for the warning you gave in chapter 12, it just prepared me for what was to come...my, that does sound dramatic, doesn\'t it! *bg*

Anyway, thank you for 2 chapters in one update! Although I do think Harry is not very smart by running away like that (ch 15) and angering Draco even more...curious how that is going to turn out!

Keep writing.

hello again ^_^

nice chapters, at least he did his best to repair his mistake. and he didnt really know about the pheromones being covered (i hope...)

heh, D/s rules!!!

hope to see more soon ^_^

:cuddles plushies: kawaii!

Well done! What an exciting chapter, and it really brings Harry\'s dilemma where other students have to see it, too.

Will Snape feature in this at all? I\'d be interested in seeing how that changes things.

Poor Harry. Draco\'s a real bastard, but I suppose a bit at the mercy of his own instincts.

Don\'t listen to those who don\'t like tihs kind of story. Your Draco is actually much more true to spiteful, malicious canon Draco than 99% of stories about him... He\'s a mean little prat, and he would do anything to have a chance to humiliate Harry. That\'s just the way he is.

Well-written, post more

wow i so love this story!! This is getting really good!!!!!!

This fict. is really original and very well written. I\'m glad to see you have some sense about animal behaviors. But I\'m wanting to see Harry pregnant and in full \'wolf mother\' mode. Like not letting anything with a penis get within fifteen feet of him. And while Harry\'s pupped, I think Draco should be more...afraid of him and what his mood swings might do, but still unable to stop being around him. Kind of like a bitch going into heat. Which I hope is what Lustrum is. With Harry going into heat and snapping at anyone who gets near him until the heat comes full on and he finally lets Snape and Draco near him.

I do love the dominant thing, don\'t get me wrong. But all species of animals don\'t have the male dominant all the time. I also really like how you\'re portraying Snape as this noble guy, tryin\' to go against his insticts. But the heat/Lustrum thing should put him over the edge right?

Is Harry going to get some pleasure from this mating thing? It seems that Draco would want Harry to come, like that would make his smell even more alluring.


Good times and rock on,

-Dom

WELL FINALLY! Hope its not going to take another 10 chapters before heres any more action...is Draco going to be a bit nicer next time? Or are u first going to let Sevy have a go at Harry?

OMG!! No offense...but what is wrong with you!!??? I mean I have no problem with Dom Draco, but this is just ridiculous! I love the plot tho...but I was cringing when I read the part where Draco was forcing Harry to give him a...favor...in front of the school...I hope the vein of this story changes soon...I like it a lot...but i feel sooooo bad for Harry...please please please change it soon!...i cannot stand to see Harry abused like this...

OMG i think Draco is horrible
i think that Harry deserves better