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for Indago

by lojenn

person Jolene
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love you! Another chapter! I love that Hermione is dom lol. I think Harry should get hurt somehow and cause Draco to freak out about losing him and so become luvy dovy in Indago sort of way. Where\'s Snape? I can hardly wait for more.
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t you make draco just a little nicer
it\'s as if he doesn\'t care for harry
oh yeah
please get to the threesome fast
update soon
person LPhoenix
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bows to the master* another chappie!!!!! yay!!!! thank you thank you thank you!!!! *waits patiently for next chapter*
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you and your bloody cliff hangers!! Uhh! (I guess im gettng a taste of my own medicine tho...*chuckles*)

Brilliant chpter!

Hermione as a dominatrix...hrrmmmm,,that gives me loverly ideas. Muahahahahaahahaa!
person Fefs
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love and hate this fic with such a passion... You are to good writer for your own good.. please update again before i loose my mind? How are you going to make this fluffy? can Draco fall in love? And Harry? Will he love the 2 slytherins? Congratulations! Hugs!
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey great chappie!!! Again another cliffhanger ending! When will they end??? Please update soon...Why cant you post all your chapters all at once? :( I love this and keep it up!
person Krazy (kallipiak)
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh. Hun, all I have to say is AMAZING! I don\'t think I\'ve read another Harry potter story that could be so true. I mean, I don\'t think that JKR will have students as halfings or anything like that, but it could very well happen. Everything was written perfectly and it all seemed very very canon, aside form the AU typish stuff. ^-^ Hermoine was very like herself---well everyone was! This has got to be the best story I\'ve read. Awesome awesome awesome.

*~* Krazy *~*
person Krazy
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I didn\'t realize if I was logged in it would put me down like a user. Nice to know. ^-^ Once again---awesomeness.
person Jolene
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like that Draco tells Harry what he should of known all along , to hell with what everybody else thinks. Why is Draco, ever so slightly mind, starting to be nicer to Harry? When is Snape going to get involed and help Harry/control Draco? I would love another chater right away ;)
person michelle
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly love this fic!!! it is one of the most captivating plot lines as well as the smooth flow of the writting making it one of the best i\'ve ever read and i\'ve read hundreds...i have to applaud (clapping loudly) your speedy updates (big grin)...waiting excitedly for the next one(looks expectantly)... i was rather shocked (looking gobsmacked) that there were no other fics in your profile...if this is your first fic you deserve many exhaltations...can\'t wait to see what happens next and how the fic ends...not that i want it to be over any time soon (hopeful w/a side of puppy eyes) continue the good work and i\'ll continue to laud and worship your greatness ohh worthy one!!!!
michelle