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by lojenn

person Storm
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yum, do I detect a gentler coupling working its way in here? Yay I love sub Harry but I hate if he is abused so badly. I love the dominant, possessive but a touch gentle towards Harry Draco so if he turns into that it would be so great. But however you do it is great because I am so in love with this story and where you keep taking it. Can\'t wait to read the next update
person Anita
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another two chapters! *bg* Thanks for that!

Now I can see this story (aka: Draco) becoming \'different\' from the first chapters. Your plot with the Supero becoming protective of the subicio is the key to it. As such, I cannot wait for the rest of the story.

Keep writing!
person Closet Skeleton
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.... wow. Just... wow. I come home from a gaming party, and there are TWO new chapters for me to read! Glee!

I definently like this new thread the story is taking - Draco beginning to act like a pure Indago instead of just Draco is most interesting - and very clever. I mean, hey, they *are* animals.... it\'s about time they act like them! And I definently like the reactions of the school - Seamus has the valid point. Why should the school believe him, especially when Harry\'s making no attempt to disprove the rumours.

Though what I really liked was Draco forcing Blaise out of his seat for Harry. We\'re beginning to see the traces of Draco\'s possessivness and protectiveness, I think. Forcing someone to move so he can sit there, awww...

I\'m guessing that what someone said about Harry coming would create a more pleasureable scent for Draco is what is coming? After all, just needs to smell more of him.... mwa ha. :D
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE, post the ones you have please?
person Closet
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had this sudden image of Harry being late, and Draco doing the whole Snape thing - \"You\'re five minutes late, Potter.\" Because you know Harry is *never* punctual.

Hey, I\'m signed in. o.O Go figure. Didn\'t know that worked.
person anon
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, if disturbing, and a bit heavy on the violence... while it\'s necessary to move the story along, it\'s hard to read, which I assume is the point. It shouldn\'t be easy to read and if it is, I would worry about the reader. Non of it is gratutious (sp?), it all serves the plot and the story and isn\'t just stuck in there for cheap thrills. On a side note, though, I have to say I don\'t agree with Closet Skeleton\'s rather arrogant remark that the other authors on this board can\'t write H/D and that we just make Draco a written version of Felton. As JKR hasn\'t fully fleshed the character out, it is impossible to say how Draco would end up, or what he might be like removed from his parents influence.

All said, a good story and I\'ll keep up with it.
person Adien Lee
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I can\'t wait to read more, I checked for an update 13 times today.

I beg you to post the next chapter!

Also I wanted to know if you had plans to get harry knocked up? I think that would be grand, but I\'m happy with things right now as well. I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Please!

Loves and such, Adien.

P.S. My boyfriend says he love this story as well, I\'m worried hes getting ideas though. *Raises eyebrow* Not all bad
person Asvaldson
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I keep TRYING to read this story, but I can\'t get around how I hate how helpless harry is in this situation. Its horrid! But then, I honestly think if I was in this type of situation, I would put a bullet in my own head rather than submit to anyone else lol. I hope that Harry can find some way to happiness... REAL happiness too, not that fake pheramone enhanced shit.
person ura
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is the voice in Harry\'s head that tells him to resist Draco once in a while?
person ura
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You said that you can post one more chapter today. That would be awesome!!! Please do!