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for Indago

by lojenn

person icestar
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ nice... and at least harry doesnt have to deal with the press... they have to deal with draco :smirks:

:thumbs up:
person miku
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww aint that just sweet of draco? /\\_/\\
i\'m lookin forward to your next chapter hon xxx
person SilverPhoenix
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg...that was wonderful!!! i love this fic(im really saying that to often when i review fics *shocked*) hehes its great, and from reading some of the AN i dotn understand why someone would stop reading after chapter 12, oh well there bloody lose *nods* cuz really, who would not want to read this? *sigh* well off to review the fic :D

(fic in its whole) its wonderfuckaful :D, i love the idea about it cuz most fics where Harry and/or Draco is a creature, they make it so loveable and sweet, this makes be fustrated and happy at the same time(which is driving me crazy lol) cuz i have a habit of feeling strong emotions in fics(i sometimes hate that)...some parts make me quesy but thats great lol cuz ive been looking for a fic like that. I like how you put everything so far as well, beautiful is all i can say...and its pretty much IC which is always a bonus...well i better not bore you but last thing, theres NOTHING you can do to this fic to turn me away from it(inless you kill off Harry or Draco(more Draco then Harry) and maybe Snape, *thinks*naw not him just Draco or Harry)

(this chapter) YAY hot shower sex!!! loved it, and YAY Harry injoyed it :D and YAY Dracos being(semi) nicer :D, and if it was me i would love to sleep on the floor ;) and i liked the part in Griffindor tower, Seamus is a bastard *crys* stupid fuck...anyways, has to be one of my fav chapters so far, and wait to read more *evil grin* you got me hocked already :D well i dont no how much i can say that this chapter was great but that what it was

(questions) just wondering but is Albus a Indago as well? *thinks* it seems that way, but im not to sure and i dont no why i think that but meh im tired lol..also well that three some(if there is one) goes on, will it just be Draco and Snape going after Harry(if you get what i mean *evil me*) or will Draco and Snape be doing stuff as well?? hehes....hmmm what else? oh yes, will Harry be toping at all? well thats it with question(which ill probably be told that ill have to wait and see *pouts*)

well im off to bed, its 5am now and i have school in 4 hours, where ill be swimming which will make me even more tired lol, hope you update soons *hugs* take care(i think this is the longest review ive every posted on here lol) oh yes and sorry for spelling errors, i suck at it
person icestar
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story :glomps authress: very nice job ^_^

:two thumbs up:
person Rebecca
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
Go Harry, he shouldn\'t care what others think of him (Go Draco too then for telling Harry?)
Update more soon! I want more chapters today! =)
person LPhoenix
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot shower sex!!! yay!!!! draco was nice!!! yippee!!!
person ura
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have not updated today yet. I cannot wait :) Please pretty.
person Yana
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry you are being supid
person Sarryn
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeously sensual. A liquid choreography of words and sensations that becomes a language of its own conception. Wonderful chapter!