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for Indago

by lojenn

person chain_lightning
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An imaginative, marathon fic. I like the distinction you make between magical creatures and magical beings. Glad you got some Snarry into the mix, as I\'m a Snarry OTPer.

Interesting to make the abuse part of the Indago\'s make up, but a part the human part can overcome.

Wonderful Slytherin solution at the end - one Draco will figure out through his house affliation, but one that would never occur to Harry because of his own. Clever, and wonderfully in-character for all.

I\'m especially pleased with your portrayal of Hermione. She\'s horrified as a witness to all these behaviors women have worked hard to eradicate in themselves. I believe her responses. I\'d feel as upset to watch a friend of mine endure such treatment.

A good read. Thank you.
person JJ
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!
Thank you for keeping Harry alive! Thank you for helping Indago Draco become more human and really caring for Harry. Thank you for having Snarky Snape save the BWL. Thank you for cliff hangers, and hot scenes. Thank you for making Dumbledore a little more human. Thank you for giving Snape a life. Thank you for drama and angst, fluff and sorrow, heartache and anxiety. And thank you for not letting Harry be such a wuss. And most of all THANK YOU FOR WRITING MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person One who walks and reads
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! What a wonderful ending. I do love stories to have endings. I\'ve been thinking about asking you if you were going to end it anytime, but at the same time I didn\'t want it to ever end. LOL. Thank you for solving my dilemma. I shall be watching for more of your writings. Sending you chocolate frogs and canary creams, cause chocolate is always good and everyone needs a laugh. Ta ta!
person anon
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing story
person Page
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*weeps uncontrollably at the feet of such a masterfull writer* I love it so much...*sniff* WRITE ANOTHER! QUICK! I I shall perish from lack of such sweet stories...*blows kisses*
person Mephistedes
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I hate you.

It\'s over. Now I\'ve lost my excuse to procrastinate. \'Indago\' has captivated me since its inception. Jeez, I can\'t believe it\'s really over! Are you sure? Seriously sure? Fatally sure!? *sigh* Please write something else to keep me from homework! I need that release! Please! There is no such thing as procrastination without \'Indago\'. The concept is dead to me now....Now I have to become a good student. *growl* Thanks for ruining it for me! :D

You did an awesome job with EVERYTHING. I can\'t wait to read what else you have to offer!
person Sens
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, serious. It was a fantastic series, as I believe I\'ve said before.
And a great ending. ^^ A+++++. Ha ha. I\'ll e-mail you as soon as
possible and then you can have something to show off to your friends
and say: \"Look what I got and you didn\'t! It was due to my great
writing skills and fabulous way to phrase my paragraphs. Not to men-
tion I have a better imagination than all of you combined! Ah ha ha ha
ha ha ha.\" Well, at least that\'s what I would do. It\'s sad to see this
end but I\'m sure all your fans will look forward to the next one. Oh,
and if I do somehow forget or you feel like bothering me, feel free to
contact: bunny_burger@yahoo.com

Adoring the beautiful pixels of each word in each chapter,
Sens.
person kyaru
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i will not cry now that it\'s over. i will NOT...
godsdammit...
i luff yew...
person crissy
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really awesome fic! really long too. i just found it for the first time the other day annd despite the 58 chapters listed in the summary i decided to read the first chapter. and well to say the least i have been up way past my bed time the last two nights just trying to see what happens next. i very much enjoyed this fic. kind of sad to see it end. maybe a sequel in the works? or have you had enough with this storyline? still the indago concept was very creative, and written very well. you did a thorough and clever job with writing about the indago and their personal quirks. a lesser writer could have easily made the concept inane. you did a good job of making it plausible. the fic was a great read.
person harial
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequal!