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by lojenn

schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I soo love this story.

My poor Harry tho.
person Closet Skeleton
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off... wow. *fans self*

Second, I would like to adress \"anon\". I\'m not trying to sound arrogant or anything like that, and I am horrified that I have come across as such. I was merely trying to say that I have read many HXD fics ((or DXG, or whatever, just whatever has Draco in it)) and not necessarily on this site, just anywhere, where Draco is so very very far from Canon Draco that he\'s just not the same character anymore. That is something I have discovered myself, and I was just trying to stress how impressed I was that LDurham has kept Draco very true to the books, is all. I\'m sorry I sounded arrogant.

Now, back to the review! Whoot! We see the whole thing with Harry\'s emotions becoming *very* important! I was interested to see that Draco *can\'t* really rape Harry anymore. His fear just makes him unable to, and I think that is most interesting. And I think I can see that making Harry sleep on the floor is just Draco\'s way of saying \"I\'m still in charge here\", just in case Harry was thinking any differently. Not that Harry was, of course, but this *is* Draco Malfoy we\'re talking about. :D Though I can definently see Harry curling up ((possibly naked?)) on the floor, shivering for awhile, then Draco abruptly announcing that he\'s sick of his whimpering, and \"Get up here.\" Not that that\'s what you\'re doing or anything, but I could see him doing that. :D

I am so very impressed with this. Keep up the amazing work!
person ura
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am trying to think where the story is going. I like it so much! I know it will be different from anything I can expect, but I imagined this plot today. Harry gets pregnant with Draco\'s child, but Draco does not know about it and lends Harry to Snape who is totally brutal with Harry and Harry loses the child as a result. Harry in his despair over miscarriage is not susceptible to pheromones anymore and can resist any Supero. So, he leaves, and Draco spends extremely miserable years looking for a love he did not realize he had. I know sounds stupid. But I want Draco punished. Please let him feel what it is like to be on the other end. I do not mean for you to pursue my stupid plot. But please come up with something that would make Draco more caring about and more respectable to Harry.
person Dominic Shade
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I really hope I\'m one of the people who are right about your story. And can you have Harry make like a purring noise after he orgasms? Like a contented purring that Draco is surprised by, but really attracted to? It would be funny to see that Harry begins making that sound without knowing it whenever he\'s comfortable, lol and it\'d be great to see how much the noise affected Draco. Like he would always want Harry sitting in his lap or somethin\' so he could lick at his neck while he makes the noise. And about the mating thing...is it that the Subs aren\'t monogamous? And the Doms are? Like the Subs have a \'herem\' of sorts and the Doms only mate with one Sub? That\'d be kinda cool to see that it\'s not Draco\'s fault for once.

*is still waiting for Harry to come and Draco to catch the scent*

Oh, and I LOVE that you\'ve been doing longer chaps. hon. Keep it up!


Good times and rock on,

Dom
person BlacklilNiteCat
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now that was good sexy chapter!!!!!! I can\'t wait to see what\'s gonna happen now bwt Harry and Draco. And did u notice Draco called Harry his name instead of Potter?? Ohhhh the plot thickens!!! UPDATEEEEEEEEE
person Fefs
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pfffewww... For a moment i actually thought you would to that to us.. I came here looking for this chapter all day! Perfect chapter.. thank God Draco is stopping being an ass.. I love this fic,... Now i don\'t hate it anymore.. is really good.. please update tomorrow? Hugs!!
person ura
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was my favorate part in this chapter:

\"Draco grunted and rolled over. He glanced at the empty nest of blankets on the floor and immediately sat up. Catching sight of Harry by the door, he visibly relaxed and then noticed Dumbledore.\"
person Rachel
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still want to knock some sense in Draco...

Please up date.
person Ravenfrog
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see you staying true to the pairing, and that you had a pheremone plan to help Draco eventually come around. I\'m glad I waited out the hard parts. *grin*
person Alexa
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just discovered this story, and I must say - wow. I like it. It\'s very ... strong.
I also have no idea what will happen next - and I *really* like that.
I do plead that Harry won\'t have sex with Snape. I know, they are not monogamous, but it\'s just... I don\'t know.
Anyway, please keep posting! And thank you very much for this experience. :-)