rate_review Reviews

Is Harry going to act and stay wimpy throughout the rest of the story? Because its getting little old. I really liked this story at the beginning and I believe that it has an interesting concept. However, I have to admit that at this point I am only continuing to read because I keep hoping Harry will stand up to Draco and grow a backbone or that their relationship will sort of even out. But Im starting to lose hope of that ever happening. I don\'t mind a dominant Draco but the extent of Harry\'s submissivemness is just not right. It\'s not that interesting anymore or romantic if the only reason Harry and Draco get together is due to some pheromones that neither could control. I really, really hope something changes in the next chapters so that the relationship between the two will be more of two equals.

Also, i have a question, how come Harry was never affected before when Snape and Draco were around. From what I understand, the potion they used to drink only inhibits an Indago\'s instincts. It does not affect nor can it stop an Indago\'s pheromones. If that\'s the case since Harry never drank the potion before (can the potion inhibit Harry\'s instinct as well?) he should still have been affected by the Supero Indagos since they do still continue releasing their pheromones.

I loved Dumbledore in that chapter! :D

Poor Harry... although I have to say that I love envisioning a knocked up Harry Potter. Yumm. lol

Kids?! I hadn\'t really thought about that... *thinking about it now* =)
More soon? Like... now? *smiles*

Harry has no freedom, i hate that it\'s soo horrible

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Sarryn Yxonomei

please sir, can i have some more *fake oliver twist accent*
really, awesome job, keep it up

*hugs author* yay you are the best!!! *dances around you* keep up the good work!!!

Poor Harry. This so breaks my heart. I hope Draco gets past the grudge stage. Can\'t wait for chapter 22!

Back to hating Draco.. Very good chapter though.. Please update soon? Yesterday i came here to see the chapter 16 times! I suffer!! Hugs!!

Great chapter. I am so glad to see this nicer Draco. Will it only last through Lustrum? Will they ever fall for each other? Also, I just realised that Draco never even kissed Harry. I want them kiss!

Credit line for Ron established by Dracow as a complete surprise! I also like that Draco pampers Harry, no matter how he call it.

Again, I want Draco kiss Harry and soon. Pleeeease!