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by lojenn

person Anita
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just occured to me (as I read the chapter again *bg*) that this poisoning thingie is the perfect oppertunity to get Snape involved! Where else would Draco go to but too a respected and older Supero who knows his potions? :)
person Loki
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Get back here! I need an update! How am I supposed to survive two whole days without knowing what\'s gonna happen to Harry??? *Gets down on knees and begs* pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease....

person icestar
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>< i missed two chapters! how did that happen!!! :is horrified with herself:

anyways, lovely, lovely chapters. I absolutely adore harry, and draco. hes so cute its unbearable. and draco is being nice in a roundabout fashion... if he ever was nice it would be like that i think.

anyway. I love this story, and though i would miss the constant updates, better to have unrushed chapters than lots of rushed ones ^_^

:two thumbs up and a plushie:
person Priss368
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is going! I wonder what Draco would think if he found out the truth about why Harry has shabby clothes & supplies(those rotten Dursleys)? As for if Harry is ready to become pregnant, I think a physical would be a good step to make sure that the years of malnourishment at the hands of his relatives hasn\'t hurt him too much. It also sounds like Dumbeldor has found a way to work with Draco in regards to Harry. Lastly, I really love that Ron & Hermoine are awesome friends to Harry. I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Priss
person lacquer
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems that I\'m now addicted to your fic. I eagerly await the next chapters and the eagerness can only be satisfied by the time I read a new chapter. Though only if time can speed by for the next chapters!!!
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapers! =)
Hell yeah, I\'ll wait for you!
Update as soon as possible, ok?
person Fefs
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, Harry thinks he is safe when he\'s with Draco.. That\'s so cute!! I\'m back to loving Draco on this chapter! But.. now i understood why you asked us not to hate you after this chapter.. This is chapter 22!! Where the good stuf that we are all waiting since chapter ONE!!! And you are going to stop updating for two days.. Yeah.. i hate you now. But congratulations, this fic is still amazing. I have a thing to ask.. Would you please consider the idea of not letting Draco share Harry with snape? I think they (Draco and Harry) will eventually love each other and i can\'t imagine how that gross and old men would fit. They won\'t have a three people marriage or something like that, right? With snape thing would always be just instinct, right? Please reconsider the idea of putting us waiting... This fic is just to good. I always come to this site over and over again just to see if this fic is updated.. Hugs!
person Canis Lupus
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, you\'re incredible... Are you actually updating daily? How ever du you manage that?? Not that I\'m complaining... *grin*
Well, I just wanted to tell you that you are GREAT! Good story, little to no spelling errors and daily updating... *unable to believe it...*
I actually haven\'t read the latest chapter yet, but the other twenty were great, so I thought I\'d let you know that, *^^* I can really feel with Harry... I normally don\'t like him THAT submissive, so I hope he\'ll get a bit more control in the future and be more himself around Draco. I really like the way you characterize him when he\'s not around Draco, though. Not all that innocent \"I don\'t have a clue about anything, am denser than a brick wall and haven\'t heard the word homosexuality in all my live\"-kind of Harry-characterization so many FF-writers seem so fond of... Can\'t understand why, he\'s so much cooler sarcastic, disillusioned and fatalistic, *grin* And it fit\'s him better, with the kind of live he had...
As for Draco... *muahahahaha* he\'s starting to get protective! *evil snicker* before he knows it, he\'ll adore everyone\'s favourite little Gryffindor-Slytherin-crossbreed... I\'m really looking forward to the sweet stuff you\'ve been promising! (Chapter 22, you said? Well that won\'t be a long time away... hurray for you! *^^*) I really love it if Draco is possessive and over-protective, *^^* Though I hope he\'ll cut out a bit on the domination-part... But, well it\'s your story, and I like it the way you write it!
You actually made me feel so sorry for Harry and angry with Lucius (*growls at Lucius*) that I had to go and think up an alternative scene somewhere round Chapter 10 when Lucius showed up and kept everyone from helping Harry...
Just one question. If this law forbids everyone to interfere with this Magical Creatures-nature-thing, doesn\'t Harry have a say in it, being a Magical Creature? If Draco gets his will legally, why isn\'t Harry allowed the same right? (So your story will work, I know, *^^* Was just a guess of mine...) Isn\'t Harry allowed to decide in his sane state of mind (i.e. far away from Draco) that he wants nothing to do with him? If no one is to interfere, could he do the \"Come near me and I\'ll kill you\"-act? He doesn\'t have to be close to Draco to perform Avada on him... And in my opin
person BlacklilNiteCat
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For those who r waiting for romance in this story, wait until Ch22!!! I remember the author promising it\'ll get better around there, so hang on!! Plus u can\'t expect Draco not to act like an ass, because if he doesn\'t, he isn\'t that Draco we all came to love haha ^.^ What I\'m most curious about is will Harry get babies anytime soon?? hmmmm.... UPDATE SOON PLZ I can\'t wait to read more!!!
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... With dominance comes responsibility. Draco learning responsibility, how interesting.