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for Indago

by lojenn

person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH yeah, I cannot believe I forgot to mention Harry\'s inner bitch!!! LOVE IT BABE!!! Draco seems so conficent too...amused...that was sexy...It shows that he can handle his \"piece of ass\". Will we see more dm/hp/ss interactions next chappie??? PLEASE??? Once again, UPDATE SOON!!! Thank you @(^(oo)^)@
person Krazy (kallipiak)
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps and waits*

Sorry. Tired for real reviews. ^^; Very good. I still insist this is the most realistic fic I\'ve read. *nodnod*

*~* Krazy *~*
person spikeprop
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am SO SO thankful and entertained by this fic. I enjoy Veela!Draco fics as much as the next person, but they have been done to DEATH!!! And your fic is so different and refreshing, but it still keeps the same basic feel as those which is the reason everyone seems to love it so much. It\'s original and fun, and I look forward to new chapters every day. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this wonderful story!!!!
person icestar
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i scare you? ;_;

well, the chapter certainly got me out of the hurt... very, very, very amusing. Poor ron and moine are going to get themselves killed, by moody harry or overprotective draco if theyre not care.

and harrys mood swings made me laugh so much... i think i cracked a rib....

very nice chapter. :two thumbs up:
person Priss368
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well! I think it\'s high time someone said something to Draco like that. I wonder if he\'ll think about it? I loved a PMSing Harry. He was hilarious! Especially when he snatched the lemon drops from Dumbeldor\'s hand (funny picture). Great chapter! Priss
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Go Ron!!! /\\_/\\ men with PMS would be scary though, but Harry makes it look so cute. I cant wait for your next chapter!
person miku
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(oops) Hahaha! Go Ron!!! /\\_/\\ men with PMS would be scary though, but Harry makes it look so cute. I cant wait for your next chapter!
person taka
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRAHHHHHH!!!!! So close but so far away. >________< Snape/Harry/Draco OTP. Sorry... i love snape/harry so much ;___; Okay otherwise it is a very well written story. Awesome plot and flow very well. Good job! Can\'t wait to read more. XD
person cve
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I love Harry so feisty and prone to mood swings. And it\'s refreshing to see Hermione and Ron standing up for Harry, even to Draco. I like the way you\'ve described the stages Harry is going thru. What a marvelous tale you continue to weave. Look forward to more.


regards--



cve
person Sarryn
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that is far too brilliant for words, beyond the capacity of language in fact. I always take such malicious glee when men are forced to empathize with femininity.