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for Indago

by lojenn

person ura
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally, Harry is sleeping on the bed! Good!
person PrincessDracona
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOH! I\'m sooooo happy right now, Thank you, Thank you! I have been gritting my teeth waiting for some real Draco feeling and loving in this one and I feel that we may be near the edge of hearing those three little words, \"For the Love of Melin Harry, Because I love you thats why!\" Ok in my version 12 words but I figured it would fit in somewhere with all the \"why do you care?\" questions. I also loved the fact that the whole chapter was blissfully Snape free, I hope that continues in the sence that as I said before I would die if you turned this one into a threesome. I will admit that there have been some Harry/Draco/Snape stories I have really liked but with the plot and the way you have written this one I feel it just wouldn\'t work and really hope you don\'t go that way. This is the perfect possesive, protective Draco fic and it only works when he wouldn\'t let anyone near HIS Harry and that includes Snape. I know I have made this point before but, I love this story so much that I just can\'t stand the thought of it going awry. Well thanks for the good chap, see ya next one.
person Fefs
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad i believed on your word!! This is really getting fluffy!! I can\'t imagine a fluffier converstion between them!! Cause.. is not corny, but have so much meaning!! Congratulations, you are really showing that Draco is beginning to like Harry. And this PMS thing is really funny! I love harry this way!! Aimmmmmmm, i\'m ancious for tomorrow so i can see another chapter!! Thanks for updating today! Good night! Hugs!
Ps: Please don\'t be scared of me... i\'m sad now..
person Insolence
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! I\'m diggin it!! Please update soon!!!! I love it so much cant wait to see what happens next in the story!
Oh yea, when will we see some dm/hp/ss action???? Please update soon!!! Pretty pretty pretty pretty please???????
:o(
person lilith
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this chapter was wonderfull, my favourite chapter so far! I love the way how you developed Harry/ Draco /Snapes relationship, and the whole indago thing. Draco becoming all protective about harry, hi hi... Will Severus learn about the Dursleys too? Then there will be two angry superos... (wants to see some Dursley-bashing). I also like your Hermione, the way she challenges Draco. He sees her as an equal because she is dominant *grin* Poor Ron, its obvious he is the sub in this relationship (well, wasn\'t it always?) Btw, I admire you for updating so regularyly. Keep it up, I\'m looking for your story every day!
person TeeDee
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this chapter. Harry reminds me of a squirrel in it, happily munching on his sugar (replace with acorns and corn-ever see one of those things at a field of corn? It\'s insane!)as the world goes on around him. And a Harry on PMS is fun! I do hope \'mione\'s words get Draco to think before he does anything drastic, but I can\'t decide if I think it will or not! I guess I\'ll just have to wait for you to show us what\'s next! And thank you for the updates!
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! k, got my daily fix. See ya tomorrow.

And... Ohhh, I love the renaisance fair. Ours until mid-summer when it\'s warmer. *hint: I\'m located where it\'s still a bit chilly. ;)

Oh, and I live under an invisible cloak. Sorry, can\'t see me. Mwa ha ha!
person april
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more see you tomrow!
person Nicole
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story i go nuts waiting for this to update. I really think that you should put at least a chapter up every hour. Update quick and with more chapters please!!!!!
person lightning_sloth
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like your story and would love to read more soon! it\'s probably one of the most interesting and best written I\'ve seen so far. please write more!