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for Indago

by lojenn

person Remus
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been waiting for this part, Harry/Snape/Draco, thank you . Please write more soon.
person Alexa
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(In no way did I mean to imply that I saw your story as just porn. Not that \"just porn\" is a bad or lowly thing either.)
person ura
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that Snape controls his impulses! I think Draco is repulsive. I almost wish Harry ended up with Snape. Snape for sure would not share Harry.

I totally love the story, but getting a bit annoying at how animalistic Harry and Draco are. Sure the human side is a large part of them still. Why does it not show much?

These Indago, did they live in tribes. If a sub sleeps with any dom hi encounters, nobody will know who any kid\'s father is. Sounds way too primitive.
person ura
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate treesomes. Harry chose a wrong dom to be with.
person Bright One
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story. Personally, I can\'t wait for the Snape/Harry part. Thank you for a wonderful story!
person Rachel
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can Harry please skin Draco alive once the lust season is done?

Or even better, chose Snape over Draco (an older, more experienced lover who has more control and will mind Harry\'s feeling).

Draco is just going with the flow, he hasn\'t change a bit and has no reason for it, maybe if he notice he can loose Harry for good... I do hope they end up together (I am a huge HP/DM fan) but Draco needs to be taken down a notch... or thirty.
person Alexa
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Finally!
HOW COULD YOU STOP HERE?!!! YOU HAVE TO GIVE US THE NEXT CHAPTER! HAVE TO!!! PLEASE!!!
I want to know how they\'ll be in the morning!!! And how his friends will react.
OH, and a question - timelines are tricky, so could you clarify - did the potion have enough time to start working?
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THNX SO MUCH FOR UPDATING QUICKLY!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY

Thnx for writing
Sophie
person LPhoenix
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and so it begins!!! *evil grin* looking forward to the next chappie
person Jessica
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love it! MORE MORE MORE!!!!