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gods subicio sounds like a biscuit name! I din\'t want to read this fic becauseof the snape sharing part but now I \'m curious !

Mmm, very yummy. Wholly lick-worthy.

Loved it!
More soon?

Oh, God! Bring on Severus. There is absolutely nothing better than hot HP/SS action. This needs to rapidly become and stay a threesome. Won\'t they be wonderful together as a family unit, especially when the little Snape\'s and Malfoys start to arrive!

Seriously, this is probably the best \"Veela\" genre fic I\'ve seen done to this point. Keep \'em coming!

Wow, this was great, I loved how anxious Harry was getting then we find out that Draco couldn\'t wait either. I noticed something about hte last chapter though that I missed the first time (chapter 31). I usually read the last couple of paragraphs of the last chapter to get back where I left off. In the second to last paragraph, you say Draco turned Harry to face the opposite direction, which would seem as if he was facing Draco but then the next sentence you say Draco pushes Harry chest down into the lounge. It just seemed a little hard to follow, like I missed a step or something. Maybe I\'m just missing something? Anyway I can\'t wait to read the next update. Great writing.

SEXIEST CHAPTER EVER!!!
That was just totally hot... I mean hot damn!
I can\'t wait to see what happens next!!

needy harry is delectable!!! can\'t wait for your next chapter xxxx

WHAT canI say,,,HOT!!!

Ok, I\'ve said before that I dreaded seeing Snape with Harry. I even begged for you not to do it. But the way Draco put it was just TOO HOT. So, I really, really, really want to read that bit of a three way porn... Snape is ok in my book now.
And I never really thought of the benefits for the sub if they weren\'t monogamous. Really, if you can be in a threesom, with people that nessesarily turn you on... instead of just a twosom... Hmmm.... what would I choose... ? You know what, PLEASE write the encounter in detail. :-)
Thank you again!

Ok I cant take it any more, I think you see our pleas since you seem to be foucusing more on the fact that Harry is not getting anything in returen, sexually but, when is he going to. At least he should realize it and be upset or angry or somthing. This cant go on for much longer. Draco is too rough and very impersonal about the whole affair and I would think that even though he figures hes is stuck with Harry as his mate that if he is acceppting that than he would want more with him also. I know Draco can be cold and cruel at the best of times but I would think that even he wouldnt want to keep screwing someone he has no feelings for other than possesiveness and protection. And I know Harry is dealing with instincts he cant fight but hes far from stupid and should see the situation for what it is and should be very unhappy about it. We all know he wears his heart on his sleeve and that alone should tell us that he definatly would want much more and that Draco must be an idiot not to see it. Sorry but I really like this story but am becoming very frustrated and wish you would at least respond to our reviews with some idea of where this is going.