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for Indago

by lojenn

person Rebecca
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is a terrible place to end for the day! I wont get any sleep at this rate!
person sethian
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so much ^.^ though Draco is kinda selfishn ( sexually speaking...)I pity Harry to be treated like this..*sigh* I hope things will get better...is there gonna be some romance between the two of them? Anyway, whether there is or not I\'ll still like it a lot. Update soon :O)
person Yana
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think Draco is the more horney one
person no offense
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, I was into this story until the last chapter. I kept up hope that somehow draco would quit being such a bastard. but, you have destroyed that hope. I like dominant Draco and that is why I started to read this story but I am unsure if I will be able to continue reading now. No offense to you, I think ou have a good plot it is just not one I can stomach any longer.
person SilverPhoenix
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you no i really agree with Draco, what was hot as hell!!! god i cant wait till the next chapter *happy sigh*...as much as i love Draco/Harry, Harry/Snape comes a very close second lol so its all good *evil grin* i have a feeling though that Sanpes not gonna like hes surprise...great chapter, loved it lots like always(i dont think theres one that i havent been) and im glad i read it, i was onna save it for tomorrow but decided to just read it now =D..well good night cant wait for the update*hugs*
person Sev\'s Lil\' Secret
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait for more....but one question.....doesn\'t Harry ever get off? This time round you mention he has an erection, but nothing about his orgasm. Is it that the subicos are destined to be frustrated? Or is it that his supero just doesn\'t give a rat\'s ass? Please believe me, I am not nit picking, just damned curious.
person wildfire
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY and update! I wish more had happened ^^ Hey why didn\'t they take Harry to snape... was he in clases too? I suppose he would be. Poor Harry freaking out.

Wildfire
person PrincessDracona
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All right thats it I\'m done! I\'m sorry but you just lost me, I really loved this story and it was going so well, but you just turned it completely sour. I got past the scene in the halls with snape ok not so bad but honestly I would have expected Draco to be mad at Snape for touching what is his, and then you make him want to watch. Then to add injury to insult you have Draco, Draco who is supposed to be falling for Harry and starting to care, take Harry to Snape himself for some threesome action, especially knowing that Harry wouldn\'t want that at all, not to mention Snape. Im sorry but this story just doesnt fit that way and it is now completely ruined for me. I have read some stories with that story line and they worked but not here, it just doesnt fit properly. I really think you are a good writer and it is depressing to say the least that I am losing my daily fix and enjoyment but I just cant go with this. To be honest it makes my heart ache with saddness that you decided to go this way, I looked foward to this update every night and now I just cant stand the thought so I will miss it. If I am jumping to conclutions and Draco is just tricking him and not taking him to snape but just wants to make him nervous or something then please email me and let me know so I will get to see the end of the story but if not, thanks for the ride up untill now. I really hope I hear from you and that I am wrong I am really sad right now, and maybe a little depressed at losing this story. Please, Please tell me its not the way it looks! My email is listed.
person lacquer
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems that Harry yet has to achieve real pleasure from their activities. How come it seems only one-sided? Been wondering that as I\'ve read that latter chapters of the fic. And Snape has yet to make another appearance it seems. When is his cue to enter? I sort of miss his appearance.
person Lola Slade
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blush* I bow down to your superior smut writing skills! I myself enjoy writing smut scenes, but Im nowhere near as...*good* at them as you are. I cant wait for the next chapter. Oh, and btw, would you be willing to help out a less *developed* smut writer improve her skills? Because, honestly...DAMN