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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was better then the other...yays a harry sandwage!!...love it..lol and as for you AN, i really dont no why people would stop reading this cuz well it wouldnt matter to me if you put a pair that i didnt like, i would still love it cuz your a great writer!!!, oh well there loss if they leave....i loved how Snape pleasured Harry and called Draco spoiled, good for Harry =) he desearves pleasure *nods*..well like always im falling a sleep so i better go, great chapter again and cant wait to read the next chapter tomorrow =D *hugs*
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit! Could you make that chapter any better??? I think not!!! One word: WOW!!! Your career as an author will be long and fruitful I can tell you that RIGHT now! Severus FINALLY made Harry come--AMAZING!! That was the hottest thing I\'ve read in aff, I\'ll tell you that right now! I feel dirty though...and am blushing like crazy right now...PLEASE write more and UPDATE SOON!!!!!! \'CAUSE I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Next chapter!!! NOW!!!!!
I\'m beyond words. *drool*
Soooooo Yummy!
I\'m beyond words. *drool*
Soooooo Yummy!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I made it through, I am slightly unhappy of course you know why, but also because although Snape did teach Draco something he didnt really seem to care other than it was good for him. I really thought it would be more for Harry and the fact tha they should care for him and his needs as well. I was hoping Snape would teach Draco how to care, maybe not in one chap, but a begining of that would have been nice. I figure here we have two Superos, and only one Sub so Snape should have taught Draco somthing about how lucky he is to have even found him, let alone have him. I mean Harry could have stayed away in the beginning, or went to Snape instead and tried to stay with him, but he went to Draco and Draco should start to see these things. As I said earlier I am willing to stck with it for now as you explained some things, but I do hope that we start to see a change in Draco soon or at least a very pissed off Harry after this night. Maybe the idea of losing Harry because of what he manipulated him into doing would shake Draco up some. Just an idea. Well I await the next chap and really hope to not have to suffer through any more of Draco purposely looking to share.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay - I\'m not normally a Harry/Snape fan but I totally understand Draco\'s selfish motivations in getting Harry and Snape together. And my God the sex was hot! Yay Harry got off!!! I\'m so happy... And it\'s good that Snape taught Draco how good it was so Draco can \"help\" him out more often *grin* I just hope this threesome is not a perm thing - I\'m still a bit squicky when it comes to Snape/Harry but I\'m sticking with you no matter what because I LOVE this story! I always want more!!!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I\'ve reviewed before. This is one of the most creative and well written stories I\'ve read in quiet a while, I\'m being 100% honest. I just really have to tell you that I disappointed with this chapter. I could understand the last one and it worked for the story, but this one has really ruined it for me. I love your writing; it
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh~ Plz don\'t let Harry have a thing with Snape. It\'s just..wrong T^T
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry you lost readers, but you were frank from the beginning that there would be three-way relationship so I am not surprised. However, Severus managed to last a long time before succumbing so nice drawing out of the tension. I am glad Harry did find arousal and climax this chapter. I thought he was doing all right since there was the sense of rightness, but did not realize he did not feel sexual arousal. Nice job and keep on writing. I love seeing a new chapter pop up!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was fucking hot!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
darnit, i had a long review, but my internet connection <_<
anyways, lets try again ne?
first - harrys touching draco. nice excuse mate. very good, it might be able to fool someone... a really naive someone. :P
second - the sweets? why would moine and ron think SWEETS could get harry off snape? whats sweeter than sev eh? (is a snarry fan too)
third - moines little talk with draco, and his response. she thinks too much sometimes, but ah well.
fourth - dracos a perv... sharing would be nice though ^___^
anyways, love this chapter too. hope ta see more soon ^_^
anyways, lets try again ne?
first - harrys touching draco. nice excuse mate. very good, it might be able to fool someone... a really naive someone. :P
second - the sweets? why would moine and ron think SWEETS could get harry off snape? whats sweeter than sev eh? (is a snarry fan too)
third - moines little talk with draco, and his response. she thinks too much sometimes, but ah well.
fourth - dracos a perv... sharing would be nice though ^___^
anyways, love this chapter too. hope ta see more soon ^_^