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for Indago

by lojenn

schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK! That was hottttt!!!

I have been asking every one the age old question today. Which is hotter? Harry/Draco or Harry/Snape

The world may never know.
person kelly
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy moly!! I don\'t normally review, but hot damn. I have been reading the whole time and have enjoyed it every step of the way. But woo-that was hot. I know that isn\'t much of a review, but please keep it up. Don\'t worry about those that don\'t like the Snape action. Your story is well written enough that if some don\'t like it-others will find their way and get sucked into it just like me!!
person Riddlestar
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
right it wasnt that bad. phew! but the next chapter is scaring me. i think im just going to skip the gross part. sorry, but Harry/Snape just freaks me out!
otherwise cool chapter. the part where Hermione and Ron try to save Harry from Snape was really well writen and funny. keep it going!
person lacquer
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
delish!! Can we see more threesomes in the future?? (more Snape....)*grins*
person Aunt Bijou
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! It\'s about TIME Harry gets to orgasm!! Of course, Draco is a selfish little git, isn\'t he? Nice of Uncle Snape to teach him what\'s what! As usual, I am loving this, I am the usual pool of goo in the computer chair. Lucky hubby, I\'ll be a pushover tonight, thanks to you!
person lilith
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, some Severus/Draco/Harry action coming! How could you stop there, arrgh! Now I\'ll probably stay awake this night just to read the next chapter! I already suffer from sleep-deprivation so update soon! :D
Draco is evil... Will Severus succumb to his indago instincts? (I hope so) Will he be furious at Draco when he comes to his senses? Or perhaps he decides to finally interfere and help Harry...
This thing with superos sharing doesn\'t make sense biologically, however. (Just biologist speaking, ignore me if you like...) Normally (among animals) the gender bearing young would like to share, because (that\'s the theorie) her (I\'ll just dab it female) genes pass on to the children anyway. The other gender however, would not share, because this would reduce the chance of his genes passing on. As superos seem to be highly territorial (Draco fighting with Hermione because she resembles a supero, etc) it doesn\'t make sence they would share the subicio. It makes sense the subicio craves to share... diffrent fathers, higher variety of children means stronger children which are more likely to survive... it just doesn\'t make sense the supero would share. Biologically.
Okay, I\'m just going to ignore that, because I definitely want to see a threesome. Just my rambling, anyway. Keep on writing!
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I can\'t wait for chapter 34! Draco doesn\'t share but he was so turned on he\'s going to this time? Holy moly!
person Sev\'s Lil\' Secret
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE!!!!!! Just how I had pictured it, I kind of thought the lack of care towards Harry was simply Draco\'s ignorance and Snape would teach the prat how to take care of a subico the PROPER way.....grins....can\'t wait til tomorrow....don\'t worry, this is one reader that is so not going anywhere
person sharon
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh good for you that you are writing according to your own imagination as it should be. I especially like the way that you tell everyone to let you write your own story and I think that is great. No need for explanations to the ninth degree needed here and as long as its a good story and in the Harry Draco section Im as happy as a clam outta here
person BlacklilNiteCat
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha Draco is soo evil!! OMG I can\'t wait to see how Snape is gonna react when he sees Harry and Draco infront of his door!! UPDATEEE