rate_review Reviews

I get the impression from the author\'s note a couple of chapters back that some people were being negative about Snape\'s involvement. Ignore them!
You handled the whole situation brilliantly. The threesome was hot and the repurcussions beautifully handled.
I think I praised your originality on Skyehawke, but I shall do so again here. As an addict of Draco!Veela stories I think this orginal take on the magical being scenario is amazing. You\'ve got me completely hooked and better yet you write quickly enough to keep me interested.
Keep up the great work!

GAH! I don\'t really care who all got twisted about Harry/Snape action... that was HOT. But then again... I like a side order of Snape with my Draco/Harry.

Ah... chapter 36... So, Draco get some comeuppance, did he? Poor Severus... what ever shall our favorite greasy git do??? Will Harry be a bit more assertive or dark? Will Draco learn anything?

Wonderfully exciting and nicely done!!!

OMG Draco is so horrible

yay! another chapter I\'m so happy! *does happy naked dance* Well without the naked part of course. Ok so I\'m in a weird mood and obviously no more Happy Harry Sandwich. pooey but ok and I was happy that someone was finally drilling it into Draco\'s head. I was wondering if he would have to get into real trouble before he straightened out. Can\'t wait to read the next installment

Hello I\'m not sure if I\'ve reviewed for you before or not so I\'m going to act like this is the first time I have. I for one love and adore your story. All of it as it is written.Your writing is very captivating and if you were to write a book I\'m sure I would enjoy that as well. Now I haven\'t read any of the other reviews but from your athors notes apparently theres some concern for the direction of your story.I feel you done a great job in setting the story and presenting the characters.Now I love Draco he is my Fav character and there are many stories that portray him as good pretending to be bad are abused and putting up a front to protect himself, I like those I enjoy them.This isn\'t one of those stories your Draco is very in character as a snarky,cruel spoiled brat, a damn sexy spoiled brat but a spoiled brat all the same and pheremones(SP) are not gooning to change that over night .Some serious damage with his pride and a crash course in the real world not the one his father created for him is the only that I see will change that and you\'ve done a great job of making the character developement as realistic as possible so don\'t let others put you down because I think your doing a great job.Now going in a completely different direction I\'m curous as to who Snape was refering to when he said \" He\'ll turn over in his grave\" was it james(Most likely) or Sirius.don\'t tell me though I\'m just stating my thoughts out loud I like to be surprised.On another note maybe the timeline in my head is off but but the first time Draco and Harry \"mated\" seemed to be cutting close to that 15 hour deadline with contraceptive potion. again there are a lot of other factors like Harry most likely would begine \"Ovulating\" that earling during the heat though it maybe possible, or I could be wong in the way I remember reading and a whole day had already past and this just redundant. I know this is getting rather long but I want to get everything out not to much more I promise. One of the reasons I first statrted reading this story was that it was a Draco/Harry/Snape you advertised it we\'ve all been warned so if someone gets squicked out they should remember they were warned a head of time that that was part of the story and shouldn\'t worry you over it. I want for there to be more snape though I know theres a ton of turmoil and bad history that needs to be over come before that can happen. I\'m just afraid they might scare you off the idea though you seem to be able to hold up your faith in your story. I know I sound kinda pushy and bitchie but I really like your story and when I read your replies to revies about people having problems with developments in your story that made perfect sense to me I get upset because its your story. There authors out there who ask for input and ideas from reviews but as far as can tell you\'ve pready much have a set idea of whats going down and people should sit back and enjoy your story the way your writing it. I soind like MOJO JOJO repeating myself over and over again I guess I\'ll stop here for now( I could go on but I have class like 5 minutes ago) so keep up the good work. and if you feel I\'ve gone to far feel free to put me in my place!!!


P>S> as I don\'t have time to reread this sorry if things are akward or spelled wrong but its early and really have to leave for class...oh and !!Yay Harry finalyy got to come!! I really did feel bad for the poor little bugger!Bye

yay! i skipped the last part of the last chapter, so im quite happy. no disturbing pictures in my mind.^^
i liked Snapes reaction. i wanted him to be angry and i was also happy that Draco got what was coming to him. another great chapter! keep going!

Two chapters in one day! You are GREAT!!!

I love Snape in this fic. He totally earned my respect.

I am glad that Draco got a lesson. The question is whether it was enough.

Since Snape is so well at controlling his instincts, does it mean that Harry could as well? Could he learn? Harry deserves better than being a Draco\'s puppet. Draco needs to learn humulity.

oh well...a nice night foiled!!! Why oh why did Snape have to have a conscience?? Oh well.
I know this is supremely superficial of me but its true! Anyways, I really hope Snape can forgive Draco and Harry of what they\'ve done...I want another threesome! (I know; I\'m the spoiled brat at home!) Atleast Snape taught Draco a lesson--dont manipulate Harry and dont be selfish! I gather that the reason Draco threw Harry out is because he was ashamed that his subicio caught him in such weak state right?? hmm...interesting...you have the animal instincts down pat!
Anyways, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! I LOVE THE FACT THAT YOU ALWAYS DO!!!!!!!