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Holy moly! I thought Snape was going to kill Draco. Then was sure Draco was going to rape Harry! I\'m sooo very glad neither happened. Can\'t wait for 36! What happens next?

\\o/ I loved!! I actualy loved this dm/hp/ss thing!! I CAN\'T BELIEVE THAT I LIKED THIS! I thought i would hate!! I think is because snape is teaching Draco how to be a better supero! Congratulations!! Hugs! Oh.. and Harry FINALLY came!!

I love your story, it\'s soooo different than other subHarfy domDraco fics. Loved Snape/Draco/Harry action, you write fabulous smut!!! The 35th chapter was perfect I loved Snape kicking Draco all over the place \'cause he\'s behaving like regular jerk all fic, especially \'bout Harry. The threesome was amazingly writen, finally Harry got some satisfying action, not just Draco buggering him to furniture. Wonder if Harry really took the contraceptive potion? Please make Draco do some groveling? I know it\'s not IC, but I loved subDraco to Snape, he surely deserves it. The Snape\'s speech was describing Draco to T!!! Update soon!!

I love your story!!! Your writing style is really very exciting. I like that you\'re giving a good explanation of the characters\' motives and attitudes, and are giving a good story while keeping your main characters in character far better than most fanfic stories. My only complaint on your writing is you\'re using Hermione as a crutch like a lot of HP fanfic writers - she simply becomes the all important source of wisdom for the reader. My recommendation for that would be thinking more about how you can incorporate her into the story without her being the answer to all life\'s problems. It\'s very difficult to find a good balance for your \"reader\'s source of information\" to keep the character interesting, and your Hermione is getting a bit too perfect. Maybe have something that only Ron can understand, or something that Hermione\'s books don\'t have the answer to. Even doing that once in a while will make both the characters and your story much more three-dimensional. That this is the biggest problem I could find is saying quite a lot for your writing ability! Keep up the great work!

err... on a random sidenote because I notice these things... in that chapter you mention Snape\'s lively hood. while it is hogwarts... and perhaps he has a rather lively hood that Draco ruined... I think you wanted livelihood.

Just keeps getting better and better.

Oh dear. Draco\'s not a very happy boy right now, which doesn\'t bode well for poor Harry! As for Snape? Ouch!

awww, poor Harry...and Draco..and well Snape too...well Draco desirved that, he souldnt have brought Harry to Snape....i wanna cry, everyone is either upset or angry and where did Snape go?? is there gonna be more Snape/Harry?? mehs its all good...god you dont no how much i love this fic...ive never read one where Harry and Draco were magical creatures and not all fuffy...i dont even think they kissed...i really really love it *nods* and now im really really tired so im gonna go again lol...update soon *hugs* and loved the chapter even though it was sad(that was a quick update by the way lols)

I almost forgot to tell you one thing that i thought maybe could be interesting.. Maybe harry could choose to be with snape for now on cause he is a more caring supero.. just so Draco can sort his true feelings... Them snape could drink the potion again and go to china and Harry and Draco would be happily ever after? Just kidding.. i know this fic is your, but a girl can dream, right? I had to try... Cause i thought it was (surprisingly) hot this chapter, but the idea of the three of them together forever just creps me out. Could you please give us a warning about the possibility of this threesome be permanent? Cause.. i truly wish to know since now or i\'ll get REALLY frustrated. Maybe you can tell just me this tiny detail through e-mail? Mine is fefysss@hotmail.com You just have to write yes or no, ok? Please have mercy.. i\'m a faithfull reviewer!! Hugs!!

*whimpers* Noo.... *sniffles* Such emotion...so real. Poor Harry feeling completely rejected now. *whimpers* *pout*

Awesome job girl...simply awesome.

*~* Krazy *~*

Very nicely done butt kicking by Snape. I wonder if Draco will understand?