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for Indago

by lojenn

person Alex
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fucking genius!! Long and well written and makes me squee and shiver in all the right places. MORE!
person Mastin
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this twist, with Snape furious at Draco and Draco in turn furious at Harry. Is he humiliated at being beaten down in front of Harry, or his own inability to take it out on Harry?

How will Snape react? Does he realize that it was more Draco than Harry who took advantage of him, or does he see Harry as another victim of Draco\'s manipulations? I\'d assume from the line about \'animal instincts\' that it\'s the latter, but it\'s an interesting issue. Please write more
person LPhoenix
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG *mouth hangs open* OMG!!! *gasp* OMG!!!!!!
person kaji11
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, you are the author of my dreams, daily updates and oh, for the 2 chapters in one day...I love you.
person kaji11
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, you are the author of my dreams, daily updates and oh, for the 2 chapters in one day...I love you.
person lilith
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was brillant! Oh, I adore you!
P.S. Thank you for answering my question.
person J
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this fic so far and the fast updates, which I\'m sure every other author out there must envy just a little. Anyways, I\'d like to say I enjoyed the threesome as Snape seemed to have more knowledge and was able to teach Draco the proper way of \'taking\' the sub and its benefits. Would it be too much to hope for another threesome? I think their relationship would work out in more ways than one, such as Snape educating Draco more about their race and it\'s cultures, shaping him into becoming a more enriched individual. Not to mention the benefit it would have for Harry to \'mature\' under his care aswell. And I would hate for Snape to be left out all alone in the cold!
person YH
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for that. Draco really has had it coming for some time now... And don\'t worry, I\'m not expecting him to change overnight.
Well, what can I say. Well done indeed. You don\'t have to apologise to anyone about any of the choices you have made with this fic. This is not an interactive story, where we can command the author, and have the story layed out for us the way we like it. I love the fact you are constantly denying us the fluff we\'re craving for. There are too many fics out there that get too damn mushy. I really respect the way you are portraying Draco. I have been soooo pissed with him, but at least he\'s realistic.
I haven\'t ever really been into HP/SS, but you made it work! It was just so hilarious that when Harry finally got some satisfaction, it wasn\'t done out of consideration, but because the Superos get a kick out of it. So true...
Usually when I follow certain fics regularly, I often have an opinion about where I would like it to go, but with this one I\'m just accepting it as it comes. You can take it where ever you like from here, and it\'ll be great. Just don\'t leave us hanging, \'kay?
person Anita
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really, I just have to review now because of your comments at the beginning of chapter 34. I do not understand what the fuss is all about?? People are being put of because of Snape and Harry together? Well excuse me if I say this, but those people should read your warnings better, since right from the first chapter, the summary clearly stated the warning \"M/M/M\" Heck...it even stated DM/HP/SS in the first chapter!!

So, don\'t apologize, since the event of those three getting it of together was clear from the beginning.

Keep on writting, since I DO read all the chapters!! *bg*
person torche
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i apsolutly love it so far, the way the plot sudenly changed in chapter 35 was fantastic. i never expected Snape or Draco to react that way upon waking up. very good writing.