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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The tension and tragedy of that chapter makes my heart ache. I have butterflies rioting in my stomach and an insatiable rapacity for more.
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!! I loved it!! I sooo can\'t wait to find out what happens next! So please update soon!!
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harsh!
I continue to read with the promises of goodness later on, still loving it!
I continue to read with the promises of goodness later on, still loving it!
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I first found this fic on Skyehawke (reviewed it there too) and just finished rec-ing it on my journal before I discovered all the lovley extra chapters here (man you update fast, I like it)... well... except for that last one. Ouch. I weep for Draco. I should probably look into a social life.
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.MY.GOD.!!!! See I actually bothered to fully write thats how enamoured, shocked and totally estatic I am with these chapters!!! Poor Draco!!! Poor Harry, although he got off lightly! Im so glad Draco didn\'t rape Harry...I really am! God I cant WAIT for the next update!!!
Now Im off to go read them all over again, THANKYOU soooo much!!!!!!!!
*Eowyns elixure
Now Im off to go read them all over again, THANKYOU soooo much!!!!!!!!
*Eowyns elixure
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Back again, soz but I\'ve been reading thru your reveiws and theirs a couple of things I\'d like to say,
1. If you DARE make Harry just go out wiv Snape as someone suggested I\'ll KILL you, no really! Not that you would coz I really dont see the story going that way, but you know for my own peace of mind I had to ask you not to.
2. Princess Dracona is an idiot for not continuing.
3. Although I wouldn\'t MIND a Snape/Harry/Draco it would not be my preference and I hope you keep Sev as distant as you have been. You know Harry has to obey him as does Draco, occasional shag now and then after this chappie but not like togeather forever. Although again I don\'t sense the story going the relationship threesome way.
4 plz note that if the above DOES happen I wont be like said person in number 2 and discontinue reading I LOVE this fic!!!
Anyway thanks again
*Eowyns elixure
1. If you DARE make Harry just go out wiv Snape as someone suggested I\'ll KILL you, no really! Not that you would coz I really dont see the story going that way, but you know for my own peace of mind I had to ask you not to.
2. Princess Dracona is an idiot for not continuing.
3. Although I wouldn\'t MIND a Snape/Harry/Draco it would not be my preference and I hope you keep Sev as distant as you have been. You know Harry has to obey him as does Draco, occasional shag now and then after this chappie but not like togeather forever. Although again I don\'t sense the story going the relationship threesome way.
4 plz note that if the above DOES happen I wont be like said person in number 2 and discontinue reading I LOVE this fic!!!
Anyway thanks again
*Eowyns elixure
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmhm! *squee* Another chapter! *does a happy dance of GLEE*
Ohhh... but it\'s so sad. Very well written. It pulled at my heart, and now I don\'t know who I want to console! I love this fic. *sniff sniff*
Ohhh... but it\'s so sad. Very well written. It pulled at my heart, and now I don\'t know who I want to console! I love this fic. *sniff sniff*
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading your reveiws and I\'d just like to say:
1. You DARE make this a Harry/Severus I kill you! No really! Not that I see the story going that way you have given no indication that it will do.
2. Princess Dracona is an idiot for not continuing with this fic!
3.Severus/Draco/Harry would not be my preference but I wouldn\'t discontinue reading if you did send the story that way. I hope you keep Severus as supreme dominant and occasional fuck after this chapter coz lets face it was HOT!!!
*Eowyns elixure
1. You DARE make this a Harry/Severus I kill you! No really! Not that I see the story going that way you have given no indication that it will do.
2. Princess Dracona is an idiot for not continuing with this fic!
3.Severus/Draco/Harry would not be my preference but I wouldn\'t discontinue reading if you did send the story that way. I hope you keep Severus as supreme dominant and occasional fuck after this chapter coz lets face it was HOT!!!
*Eowyns elixure
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Wow......Snpaey\'s REALLY pissed off huh? Damn. Thou now I\'m VERY sorry for Draco....I mean Draco\'s been a prick and all but he just lost his GODFATHER!!! Even if he really messed everything up, I have a small hope that Snape might forgive in time.......then there\'s my more evil side that wants Draco to BEG for forgiveness (just think of it a MALFOY begging on hands and knees telling you how stupid & sorry he is! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Ahem*.....ANYway, just to let you know I\'ve read and re-read that threesome for about 3 or 5 times!!!! ^_^ I mean come on EVERYone should love Snpaey!!!! And know to say/type everthing you should already know..........I LOVE THE STORY AND WELL BE COUNTING THE SEC.\'S TIL\' IT IS UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ja ne
Can\'tWaitCan\'tWait!
Miss War-chan ^_^
Ja ne
Can\'tWaitCan\'tWait!
Miss War-chan ^_^
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better! I am finding your exploration of the psychology of this situation fascinating. You\'re keeping Snape in character as well as Draco. I even think that Harry is remaining in character when Draco and Snape are not in the picture, and you have done an excellent job structuring a sociology for the Indago that explains Harry\'s sub behavior. Too many Veela fics turn either Harry or Draco into poor characterizations of a weepy female without adequate backgroud for the change.
You just need to keep issuing warnings up front. This afterall is AFN, people should be able to take some very rough behavior if they have been warned.
Also, I know this is not up for a vote, it\'s your decision, but I would love to see Harry end up with Snape. He is displaying far more character than Draco. I think he could protect Harry as he deserves to be.
You just need to keep issuing warnings up front. This afterall is AFN, people should be able to take some very rough behavior if they have been warned.
Also, I know this is not up for a vote, it\'s your decision, but I would love to see Harry end up with Snape. He is displaying far more character than Draco. I think he could protect Harry as he deserves to be.