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for Indago

by lojenn

person shelly101
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, too hot to handle! please, don\'t let that be the end of Snape and Harry! it\'s too good to stop now!
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot!
Loved it!
More soon?
person LPhoenix
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was possibly the hottest claiming i\'ve ever \'witnessed\'... amazing.. simply amazing! *hugs author*
person Lee
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make up sex is always wonderful, isn\'t it? I just loved this chapter. It appears that Draco is either still feeling Snape\'s wrath or is going for monogomy. I wonder which it is.
person oblivi8
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, this story was a reccomendation. I really tried to stick with you but I couldn\'t even get halfway through this chapter so i am finished. I am not squicked or offended..this is just so completely unrealistic.
person Fefs
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for getting me out of the dark with your e-mail!! I\'m so happy with what you told me!! And i am even more happy now that our possessive Draco is back!! Did you see he is jealous?? Did you see that he is afraid Harry would look for pleasure with snape again?? Did you see?? h
person Yana
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha Draco has gone a bit possessive
person sakuya
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
duuuuuuude! that was such a brilliant scene with all three of them and then with harry and draco, one of the best i have read! (believe me i have read alot!!!)soooooooooooooooooo gorgeous!!! i am now officially in love with your slash scenes!!!!!!!!! not in love in fact, obsessed! cant wait till you update!, (and have more slashy goodness ^-^)!\" xo
person RiddleStar
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, i bet the werewolves are going to do something nasty!
person dido
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow two chapters! Thanks. So happy Snape was more informed/concerned(?) about the need for Harry to enjoy sex. I was a bit upset about chapter 33; it did seem as if Draco was getting a bit more considerate of Harry in previous chapters. Or at least not just seeing Harry as a his enemy turned new fuck toy. However your explanation at the beginning of chapter 34 made sense, especially since, as you pointed out, your Draco is very true to canon. More than Draco\'s behavior, I guess what has really disturbed me has been Harry\'s total lack of free will as a subicio. Every time his instinct to please overtakes his self respect I shutter. And this is what makes the story interesting: will there ever be a time when Harry doesn\'t have to submit against his will because Draco doesn\'t force him?
Thanks for updating so quickly and for the story.